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FEEDBACK
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
Layout structure
Quality photos/ creative ideas with photography
Interesting and relatable content to the theme of the issue
• What improvements could have been made to the product?
 Not immediately obvious that they're adverts
 The preview article – little plain
 Font could be bigger in certain areas
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
USE OF COLOUR
Great photography
Clear layouts/ uncluttered
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
 No range in model sizes
More variety in gender of models
More continuity
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
 Clear professional photos
 Eye catching
 Consistent design and aesthetic throughout
• What improvements could have been made to the
product?
 More content
 More variety in styles of clothing
 More variety in font
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer feedback?
• The continuity in design
• The positive affect from the use of colour
• Need for more variety in font
• Could do with more content
• What do you disagree with from your peer feedback?
• The lack of continuity in astatic
• Not imminently obvious the advert are adverts
• Preview article is visually plain
Peer Feedback Summary
After collecting my peer feedback I was very happy to see my design concepts was
taken the way I wanted it to be. The large use of colour had the creative affect that I
planned it too without my pages being cluttered. As well as my photography, the
quality of images was very important due to the magazine types being
'fashion/photography'. I wanted the images to be striking and eye catching and from
my peer feedback I believe I succeeded with this intent.
I received mixed reviews on my advertisements and also the idea of my magazine
having continuity. I do take the point on my adverts being a little plain, but I stand
behind my decisions as I did want the focal being the image and when I looked at
existing advertisements, there was rarely more text than the brand name/logo.
I would of liked more variety in models but I do believe I had a good variety for the
amount of content I had. One person said my magazine could do with more content,
and I do agree but due to a time limit I chose to go for quality rather than quantity.

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Evaluation pt 2

  • 2. Feedback 1 • What did you like about the product? Layout structure Quality photos/ creative ideas with photography Interesting and relatable content to the theme of the issue • What improvements could have been made to the product?  Not immediately obvious that they're adverts  The preview article – little plain  Font could be bigger in certain areas
  • 3. Feedback 2 • What did you like about the product? USE OF COLOUR Great photography Clear layouts/ uncluttered • What improvements could have been made to the product?  No range in model sizes More variety in gender of models More continuity
  • 4. Feedback 3 • What did you like about the product?  Clear professional photos  Eye catching  Consistent design and aesthetic throughout • What improvements could have been made to the product?  More content  More variety in styles of clothing  More variety in font
  • 5. Peer Feedback Summary • What do you agree with from your peer feedback? • The continuity in design • The positive affect from the use of colour • Need for more variety in font • Could do with more content • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? • The lack of continuity in astatic • Not imminently obvious the advert are adverts • Preview article is visually plain
  • 6. Peer Feedback Summary After collecting my peer feedback I was very happy to see my design concepts was taken the way I wanted it to be. The large use of colour had the creative affect that I planned it too without my pages being cluttered. As well as my photography, the quality of images was very important due to the magazine types being 'fashion/photography'. I wanted the images to be striking and eye catching and from my peer feedback I believe I succeeded with this intent. I received mixed reviews on my advertisements and also the idea of my magazine having continuity. I do take the point on my adverts being a little plain, but I stand behind my decisions as I did want the focal being the image and when I looked at existing advertisements, there was rarely more text than the brand name/logo. I would of liked more variety in models but I do believe I had a good variety for the amount of content I had. One person said my magazine could do with more content, and I do agree but due to a time limit I chose to go for quality rather than quantity.