pre production final mark

1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback Student Name: STREET Chloe
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Blog Teacher comments:
1. Similar Products:1 music video analysis inc.
Goodwin
Yes Tom Speight (Little Love) - good analysis of video showing clear understanding
of conventions. Key elements identified relating to narrative and genre.
Analysis needed to include more use of Goodwin (star image, notion of looking
(polaroid pictures) – please add. Analysis has been improved with good detail
in feature of video in relation to Goodwin.
2. Ideas visualisation feedback and initial ideas Yes Good feedback from peers to gain ideas, with good analysis of feedback
3. Genre Research Yes Good detail on genre with some detail on key features and artists. Work shows
good research with some good detail on progression of genre.
Images and links to videos. In the ‘Evolution of the singer/songwriter’ bit add
the names of the artists not just the years. What are the sub-genres – are the
artists usually rock? Folk? Work amended showing better understanding of
genre.
4. Target Audience Yes Very good detail and use of primary research with some analysis, but no
secondary research. – Please add secondary research plus sources
5. Digipak and advert analysis (2 of each) Yes Very good detail and analysis of digipak and adverts with links to colour and
use of font, however more could be said on how artist is represented – please
add. Work amended with more detail added, showing a clearer understanding
of how the artist has been represented.
6. Annotated lyrics Yes Good annotations on lyrics with detail on shot type, actors and action.
7. Storyboards Yes Great storyboards with great technical detail – clear style and presentation,
good work!
8. Shot list Yes Good detail on all shots of your video - location, equipment and actors,
costumes and props
9. Locations recce Yes Good detail on choice with clear links to song and idea – add corridor image.
Image added with some detail included on suitability.
10. Floor plans Yes Good clear plans, lots of detail
11. Costume Yes Clear nice detail on choices made
12. Actors Yes Good detail on choices, good presentation, and great that your actor is willing
to shave his hair! – remove surnames of minors. Work has been edited with
better detail now added.
13. Props Yes Clear detail on props to be used
14. Production schedule including equipment Yes Good clear detail on all stages of production and equipment to be used
Initial Mark out of 20: 15 – good work with clear presentation, needs more images and detail in key areas.
Teacher name: M Drummond Date: 08/11/17
Student action plan for improvement
1. Re-written Music video analysis of ‘Little Love’.
12. Removed actors surnames and added more detail about my choices.

2. 9. Added a corridor image.
3. Added the artists to the years and their sub-genres
5. Re-written in blogger and added how artist is represented
Final mark out of 20: 17
Improvements have been made using initial feedback. Overall an excellent body of pre-production work.
Teacher name: M Drummond Date: 15/01/18