ASD

1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: SMITH Angus
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – music video analysis Yes
2. Genre Analysis (including genre & digipak research) Yes
3. Target Audience Yes
4. Annotated lyrics Yes
5. Drafts Yes
6. Storyboards Yes
7. Shotlist Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan Yes
9. Locations Yes
10.Costumes Yes
11.Props Yes
12.Actors Yes
13.Equipment Yes
14.Production schedule Yes
Teachers comments
1. Excellent analysis of Lover of the light by Mumford and Sons. Extremely
detailed analysis with great application of Goodwin’s theory and technical
language.
2. Genre research completed using prezi. Good level of detail and
information presented, you could add more images to make this research
more visual. Images now added. Comprehensive analysis of several
digipaks and posters from a variety of artists, excellent level of detailed
analysis.
3. Target audience identified well. Fantastic sketches of what you visualise
a typical audience member to look like. Please upload the male, as only
the female is showing.
4. Good clear annotated lyrics showing your initial thoughts well.
5. Good evidence of ideas drafting. You could add your thoughts to the post
it note exercise, what did you think of other people’s suggestions?
Thoughts about peer feedback now added.
6. Excellent use of technology to create your storyboards, shows your ideas
clearly and effectively.
7. Extremely detailed shot list encompassing your whole video, well done
8. Comprehensive floor plans showing your plans for your main locations
well
9. Excellent recce photos with choices explained well.
10.11. 12. Costumes, props and actor choices all explained in one well
written powerpoint. Costume and prop choices are detailed well using
images. Actor choices are explained excellently.
13. Excellent equipment list including technical specifications of equipment
used.
14. Excellent production schedule showing all aspects of the production
process. Will 1 week be enough to produce your digipak and poster? Dates
now adjusted.

2. Overall an excellent body of work Angus, well done. Excellent use of
technologies throughout. You could gain a few extra marks if you improved on
feedback above. You should also seek permission from parents to use the
younger actors in your video.
You have used your feedback to make improvements well. Good addition of
permission letter from parents giving permission for the child actors. Excellent
addition of slow motion test to test your abilities to record at the speed you
require.
Mark out of 20: 17/20 19/20
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 18/12/16 09/02/17
Student action plan for improvement
I have improved my Genre Research by adding photos to aid the visual look of
it.
I have added comments and thoughts to my (Class) Drafts.
I have changed the production schedule dates, but not the digipak and poster
dates because I believe that a week is long enough to make them.
I was unable to upload the final drawing on my target audience because of
unforeseen circumstances.
I have uploaded to my blog ''a slow motion test' video and permission letters to
the parents of the two children I will be using.
Final mark out of 20: 19 Date: 09/02/17