Arthur Blackwood pre-production feedback

1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback Student Name: BLACKWOOD Arthur
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Blog Teacher comments:
1. Similar Products:1 music video analysis inc.
Goodwin
Yes Tribe Called Quest (Dis Generation) - a good analysis of video using
Goodwin. Good understanding shown with key elements identified relating to
culture and genre. Screen grabs would have made it clearer. No reference to
video shot in black and white? Why is this? - add why in B&W? Post
amended showing clearer understanding, good addition on B&W.
2. Ideas visualisation feedback and initial ideas Yes Some feedback from peers to gain ideas, needed better analysis of feedback
– add. Post amended with better reflective detail on how feedback could be
used.
3. Genre Research Yes Good detail on history of genre with good detail on key features and artists.
Work shows good research with brief but good detail on history and how
genre has progressed. Good info on key artists, images and links to videos,
plus more on early success and links to culture. – add source. Added
4. Target Audience Yes Good detail with strong evidence of secondary research, but where did you
get secondary research? – add source. Added
5. Digipak and advert analysis (2 of each) Yes Some nice analysis of digipak and adverts with links to culture and fan base.
– you need 2 of each, please add a second. Post added with some nice
detail, but breakdown tends to become too descriptive and not analytical.
6. Annotated lyrics Yes Good annotations on lyrics but no detail on shot type, location, costumes and
actor, could this be useful? Post amended linking storyboards and shot list
7. Storyboards Yes Great storyboards with great technical detail
8. Shot list Yes Fantastic detail on all 172 shots of your video
9. Locations recce Yes Images and brief description on how locations will be used
10. Floor plans Yes Map with detail on where filming will take place, with shot number and
description – please rotate. Done
11. Costume Yes Some nice detail on choices made - add images. Done
12. Actors Yes Good detail on choice – remove surname – Change. Done
13. Props Yes Good detail on props to be used
14. Production schedule including equipment Yes Good clear detail on production but no detail on pre-production - Please add.
Done
Initial Mark out of 20: 15 – good work with clear presentation, needs more images and detail in key areas.
Teacher name: M Drummond Date: 08/11/17
Student action plan for improvement

2. Final mark out of 20: 18
Improvements have been made using initial feedback. Overall, a good body of pre-production work showing good planning and a
clear idea and vision. Good presentation.
Teacher name: M Drummond Date: 15/01/18