1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: Alexandra Jarvis-Ferentinos
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – music video analysis Some
2. Genre Analysis (inc. genre & digipak research) Some / Yes
3. Target Audience Add
4. Annotated lyrics Add
5. Drafts Yes
6. Storyboards Yes
7. Shotlist Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan Yes
9. Locations Some
10.Costumes Yes
11.Props Some / Yes
12.Actors Add
13.Equipment Some
14.Production schedule Yes
Teachers comments
1. Some good analysis, and even though you mention Goodwin, when analysing the video
refer back to some of his points.
2. You need to add more detail and examples of digipaks, not CD covers. Good additions
of digipaks with good detail on image sand use of colour
3. More detail needed on audience. What other artists might your audience like? Are they
represented in other videos. How will you ensure your audience watches your video –
shots of singer? A funny narrative? Will this attract them?
4. Add annotations to your lyrics
5. Evidence of initial ideas, could be developed especially after peer analysis.
6. Good effective storyboard with good variation of shots and movement.
7. Good detail on shot list.
8. Work now added, Google Maps with some detail where action takes place.
9. Detail is good if not extensive. Add more images of the different locations around
school.
10. Nice detail with good use of images.
11. Add more detail – how will they be used? Add images. Images added plus how they will
be used in the video.
12. Some very nice detail on your choice of actors – especially the girls. Add images of your
actors in costume!
13. Add more detail – how will they be used? Add images
14. Evidence of schedule but lacks detail and dates.
Check you spelling for silly mistakes – ‘sebgenre’/ ‘abd’ /
Mark out of 20: 10
Teacher name: Date:
Student action plan for improvement
Some very good work with lots of detail and clear understanding of your video
and genre. Add annotations of magazine adverts and floor plans.
Advert analysis included of Coldplay plus Google Maps to show plans.
Mark out of 20: 11 Date: Feb 2014
Final mark out of 20: 15 Date: Apr 2014