This is my pre-production feedback.

1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback Student Name: MOSLEY Benjamin
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Blog Teacher comments:
1. Similar Products:1 music video analysis inc.
Goodwin
some Fantastic shot by shot analysis of chosen music video. However you have
not used Goodwin’s theory. Talk through the 6 parts and 5 ways to analyse a
music video to look deeper into the video. No improvements made.
2. Ideas visualisation feedback and initial ideas some You have uploaded your peer feedback. However you need to add your
thoughts on feedback received. Do you agree with the suggestions? Will you
use any of them in your video? No improvements made.
3. Genre Research Y Well researched piece on grime music.You could add images of the
bands/artists discussed to make it more visual. Please add a citation section
– what websites did you get your info from? No improvements made.
4. Target Audience some 1 good avatar of your stereotypical audience members. You could add
theory to this, where on the NRS scale and 4C’s scale are they? Did you do
any research into what the audience expect to see from your genre?
No improvements made.
5. Digipak and advert analysis (2 of each) Y Quite brief analysis of the covers and posters chosen. You have only done 1
CD cover and 1 advert, please add 2 more. Think about the fonts and
images used, what do they tell us about the genre? No improvements made.
6. Annotated lyrics some Notes on what will happen during verse 1, what will happen during the rest
of the song? No improvements made.
7. Storyboards N Missing Missing work not added.
8. Shot list N Missing Missing work not added.
9. Locations recce Y You have one actual location shot, the rest are example shot types. You
should include photos of all shooting locations. Descriptions are quite brief,
more detail could be added. Are there any risks that you identified for this
location? All images now uploaded with some brief descriptions of the
scenes that will be shot there.
10. Floor plans N Missing Missing work not added.
11. Costume Y Costume choices explained well with some images.
12. Actors N Missing Missing work not added.
13. Props Y Prop choices explained well, you could add images. No improvements
made.
14. Production schedule including equipment Y Missing Production schedule now added, split into 3 clear stages. Good
amount of email for pre-production and post-production. Production could
have the same level of detail.

2. Initial Mark out of 20: 3/20
Not the level expected for A2, far too much missing. You have only fully completed 3 tasks. Please complete all work fully and
make sure all work is labelled –preliminary tasks, pre-production and theory. Also missing preliminary tasks and song
permissions.
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 17/11/17
Student action plan for improvement
No action plan given from student
Final mark out of 20: 5/20
You have not made use of improvement time Ben, this is a real shame. Work handed in is incomplete and minimal. Work that has
been handed in is still not labelled ‘pre-production’.
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 15/01/18