Raybould matthew a2 cw pre production tasks improvements

1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: RAYBOULD Matthew
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – music video analysis y
2. Genre Analysis (including genre & digipak research) y
3. Target Audience y
4. Annotated lyrics y
5. Drafts y
6. Storyboards Check Please
7. Shotlist Check Please
8. Layouts – floor plan Check Please
9. Locations Check Please
10.Costumes y
11.Props y
12.Actors y
13.Equipment Check Please
14.Production schedule Check Please
Teachers comments
1. Alanis Morissette/ Beatles/ Beach Boys – basic detail on analysis of video
with imagery and technical elements discussed with some links to Goodwin
and narrative theory. At times detail is too descriptive and not analytical.
2. Some nice detail on Psychedelic rock music using Word and Prezi,
showing concise research. Early influence added with good detail and
examples. Some nice links to culture, but could use more images. You
need to add your sources!
Post has been added on album covers of the same genre, which again
shows understanding of task and conventions.
3. Some nice detail on audience with good links to genre. But you need to
include evidence of research either primary or secondary and other
interests your audience may have. Add
4. Good clear post on lyrics, showing initial ideas
5. Good early post showing initial ideas. Brief post of ideas drafting, with brief
reflection on comments – add more
6. Missing
7. Missing
8. Missing
9. Missing
10.Good detail added on what actors need to wear in relation to genre
11.Some detail added as to choice of props
12.Good detail on actor choices and suitability to video
13.Missing
14.Missing
Overall this is a very fair body of work. Some good use of technologies
throughout. At this stage you are missing too any posts – why? Plus you need to

2. add more detail where requested. Your work is too brief, you need more detail
and you need to show your sources.
You could add additional content such as a risk assessment.
Good clear blog.
Mark out of 20: 10/20
Teacher name: M Drummond Date: Jan 2017
Student action plan for improvement
Student has added/amended the following:
 Storyboard is scruffy and lacks any technical detail on camera
 Shot list has good detail on camera, location and description
 Floor plan are aerial pics from Google…not a floor plan
 Location images taken from web, but does have some detail on how/why
they are to be used
 Equipment has some detail on camera and tripod
 Basic detail on schedule, only 5 dates added?
Final mark out of 20: 12 Date: Feb 2017