1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: Sophie Wrixon
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – music video analysis yes
2. Genre Analysis (including genre &digipak research) yes
3. Target Audience yes
4. Annotated lyrics yes
5. Drafts yes
6. Storyboards yes
7. Shotlist yes
8. Layouts – floor plan yes
9. Locations yes
10.Costumes yes
11.Props yes
12.Actors yes
13.Equipment yes
14.Production schedule yes
Teachers comments
1. Good analysis of the music video ‘Chocolate’. You could add more detail,
such as can we see all 6 parts of a video that Goodwin would expect us
to?More detail added.
2. Great prezi defining the indie folk genre. The awards section could be
more detailed (where are these awards held? USA I assume?) Your
digipak research and annotations are very detailed and well thought
through.
3. Good visual representation of your target audience with blog post to
match it.
4. Lyrics now added with your thought on the meanings behind them and
your ideas.
5. Evidence of ideas drafted
6. Storyboards are clear. Will you fit the whole song in the 12 scenes?
7. Shot list now added – could this be more detailed?
8. Floor plan now added,
9. Good location shots. Are there anymore?
10.Some mention of costume in the actor profile with reasoning.
11.Props now added.
12.Well though through casting a musician to play the lead role in your
video.
13.Equipment now added.
14.Costumes, actors, props and equipment can be stated here if you do a
detailed production schedule.Your production schedule has been
updated and includes much more detail.
Good addition of the risk assessment, production roles and actor profiles. Your
work is very details and well set out Sophie. However as it is missing key part

2. this is only a level 1 at the moment. Please upload all outstanding work.
All work has now been completed and uploaded. Good additional work with
permission slips. Excellent work applying Goodwin to your video (watch out for
use of capital letters in you post).Additional music video analysis is detailed.
Excellent planning well done. Level 4.
Mark out of 20: 7
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 02/01/14
Student action plan for improvement
I am going to change my pre-production schedule too add more detail to when
I’m filming each scene and editing each bit. Also I’m going to add too my lyric
annotation, too add what I’m going to do in my video at each point in the song
rather than just annotating Newton Faulkner’s lyrics themselves. Also too take
my too the next grade boundary I’m going to add another music video analysis
using Goodwin’s theory.
Final mark out of 20:16 Date:21/01/14