Mosley benjamin evaluation and overall feedback sheet
1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: MOSLEY Benjamin
Planning – mark out of 5/20
For full comments and details please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction –
For full comments and details please see the production marks sheet
Main Task (music video) – mark out of 30/40
Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) mark out of 7/10
Ancillary Task 2 (Poster) mark out of 7/10
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 10/20
Question 1:
Answered using word and slideshare. Uses 9 stills from the video to discuss
lighting, camerawork, costumes and locations. Some good analysis of how your
video conforms to the genre, however this would have benefited from the use of
more examples to back up your points.
Question 2:
Answered using prezi. Some good analysis of font, colour choice and imagery.
Good links made between products and how they represent your artist. More focus
could have been on your work rather than the actual artist (AJ Tracey) and a
comparison to him.
Question 3:
Answered using prezi. Some good use of peer and audience feedback. Did you
only ask ‘what genre?’ as a question to your focus group? Some good thoughts on
how you would improve based on feedback, more detail would be useful in the
focus group/questionnaire.
Question 4:
Answered using prezi. Most of the key technologies have been mentioned
photoshop, premiere pro, camera etc. But what about everything else? Google,
youtube, blogger, slideshare, word, powerpoint, outlook, social media etc?
Overall quite a reliance on prezi for evaluation answers with mostly basic analysis.
Planning 5/20
Main Task (music video) 30/40
Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak 7/10
Ancillary Task 2 (Poster) 7/10
Evaluation 10/20
Total 59/100
