1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback Student Name: HUDSON Lauren
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Blog Teacher comments:
1. Similar Products:1 music video analysis inc.
Goodwin
Y Excellent analysis of Ariana Grande video using Goodwin’s full theory.
Excellent use of technical terminology throughout. There are a few spelling
errors. Errors corrected.
2. Ideas visualisation feedback and initial ideas Y Good use of album cover to display peer thought. You should add if you are
going to use any of these suggestions or not. Analysis now added.
3. Genre Research Y Good use of prezi. Well researched but brief, you could include
images/video examples of your artists and awards and styles and attitudes.
Please embed or hyperlink your link to prezi. Please add a citation section –
what websites did you get your info from? No changes made.
4. Target Audience Y Excellent use of primary research to find out more about what your audience
thinks of your artist. Questions could have been more focused on the genre
to find out what conventions they would expect to see in a Sia video.
Excellent representation of stereotypical audience members using avatars
and annotations.
5. Digipak and advert analysis (2 of each) Y Excellent analysis of 3 CDs and 2 adverts. Presented neatly and clearly you
break down your points well. If possible please rotate the posters for ease
when reading. Now rotated.
6. Annotated lyrics Y Excellently edited lyrics, great use of colour to separate the 3 narrative lines.
7. Storyboards Y Clear, well drawn storyboards. Are there any camera movements you need
to add? Could you add colour? No changes made.
8. Shot list Y Clear, concise shot list, expresses your vision well.
9. Locations recce Y Floor plans and recce done as a post together. Excellent images and
/explanations of what scenes will take place where. Well drawn floor plans
with clear keys. You could add any elements of risk to this to push your
answer further. Risk now added.
10. Floor plans Y
11. Costume Y Good explanation of costumes using images.
12. Actors some Good explanation of actor choices, please add images. Images now added.
13. Props some Good explanation of prop choices, please add images. Images now added.
14. Production schedule including equipment Y Good clear production schedule split into the 3 areas well. You could be
more specific on what you will edit each week, could you specify scenes?
You should also add your digipak and poster production/post production.
More detail on editing now added.
2. Initial Mark out of 20: 15/20
This could be an excellent body of work once improvements are made, well done
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 09/11/17
Student action plan for improvement
1. Re read andcorrectedwhat I noticed.
2. I have addedif I’m going to use the suggestions.
3. I cant accessmy prezi myself sonotsure whatto do!
4. NO CHANGESNEEDED.
5. I’ve rotatedthe posters.
6. NO CHANGESNEEDED.
7.
8. NO CHANGESNEEDED.
9. I have addedto the blogpost above the picturesanddrawingstosay what hazardsI’mgoingto be cautiousof andhow I will prevent
themfromhappening.
10. SAME AS ABOVE.
11. NOCHANGES NEEDED.
12. Addedphotosof myactors.
13.
14. AddedwhatI’mgoingto be editingeachweek.
Final mark out of 20: 16/20
Improvements now made. Overall this is in level 4, an excellent body of work.
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 13/01/18
