This document provides feedback from a teacher to a student, Tom Fearon, on his pre-production tasks for a film project. The teacher indicates that for many of the tasks, including script, storyboard, shotlist, locations, costumes, props, actors, and production schedule, the student had not originally uploaded any work. The teacher leaves comments on how to improve the work that was included. The student has since uploaded work for most of the tasks, but is still missing a shotlist. The teacher gives an initial mark of 2 out of 20 but indicates the work is now at a level 2 after improvements, with a final mark of 11 out of 20.

1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: Tom Fearon
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Some Yes
2. Genre Analysis Yes
3. Target Audience Some Yes
4. Script No Yes
5. Drafts No Yes
6. Storyboard No Yes
7. Shotlist No
8. Layouts – floor plan No Yes
9. Locations No Some
10.Costumes No Yes
11.Props No Yes
12.Actors No Yes
13.Equipment No Yes
14.Production schedule No Yes
Teachers comments
1. You have only analysed 3 film openings (Insidious, Quantum Of Solace
And Back to the Future). You need to add another film and with all of
them state how these openings might be useful/inspirational to your film.
Analysis of The Conjuring now added. Although no mention of how you
will use these films to help with your film opening.
2. Good prezi on your genre. Could you add more images of the films etc
you talk about to make it more visual? Some images now added.
3. Some work on target audience. I appreciate your thoughts on your target
audience and appearance but you are trying to establish who are your
‘stereotypical’ audience members, their likes/dislikes etc. You need to
know this in order to reach them with your film. This has now been re-
written in a more appropriate tone.
4. No work uploaded Clear script now added in the correct format
5. No work uploaded Some evidence of drafting throughout the later stages
6. No work uploaded Storyboards now added, showing your narrative well.
7. No work uploaded
8. No work uploaded Clear floor plan of the main scene.
9. No work uploaded Some locations have been identified, although
information is very brief and not all locations included.
10.No work uploaded Costume choices very brief although some attempt at
colour analysis has been given
11.No work uploaded prop choices outlined well, images could be added
12.No work uploaded Choice of actors identified, you could add images on
them and reasons behind choosing them
13.No work uploaded Equipment choices explained well, good addition of
images

2. 14.No work uploaded production schedule now added, covers all areas well
although is quite brief. You could say which parts you will edit when.
Where is all your work Tom? This is a fail. Please upload all your work.
All work has now been uploaded to blogger, with the exception of the shot list. It
is a shame you have not used the time given to add this as much of your work is
proficient. However with this missing this is partially incomplete – level 2.
Mark out of 20: 2
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 22/12/14
Student action plan for improvement
Final mark out of 20: 11 Date:15/03/15