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1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback Student Name: FRULLO Samuel
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Blog Teacher comments:
1. Similar Products:1 music video analysis inc.
Goodwin
Y Great essay on how you can apply the 6 traits Goodwin would expect to see
in a music video. What about the 5 ways to analyse a video? – please add.
Also no mention of Goodwin. Start with an introduction. Introduction now
added and Goodwin fully explained. 5 Ways to analyse a video still missing.
2. Ideas visualisation feedback and initial ideas Y Good use of wordle to display feedback.
3. Genre Research Y Excellent genre research, great detail researched well. Was this a prezi? If
so please upload as one as some of the slides repeat. Please add a citation
section – what websites did you get your info from? Citations now added.
4. Target Audience Y Researched well using NRS scale and 4C’s scale. Although the children
don’t fit with the NRS scale, you could mention their parents and where they
would sit. Target audience visualised well with a sketch. No improvements
made.
5. Digipak and advert analysis (2 of each) Y 3 disney cds and 2 pop album adverts. Excellent analysis Sam. Great
analysis of colours and fonts used throughout and how the products link
together.
6. Annotated lyrics Y Excellent detailed notes, show your vision and ideas well.
7. Storyboards Y Good clear storyboards that visualise the sections mentioned well. Please
complete the ‘home’ section in more detail, what lyrics do these cover?
Descriptions in the shot box? No improvements made.
8. Shot list Y Great detail on the 20 shots you have, is this enough for a full video? Please
also add detail to the ‘home’ section – shot numbers etc No improvements
made.
9. Locations recce Y Excellent detail on this. Great use of images and photos backed up with
good descriptions of scenes to be filmed. Very ambitious locations, well
done!
10. Floor plans Y Excellent floor plans. Love the use of Paddington in your key to show where
the shots take place! Good level of detail and key to show where the shots
and camera will be.
11. Costume Y Done together as a blog post. Items well explained with good use of images.
You could make sure the font is all the same size throughout. Layout of post
updated.
12. Actors Y
13. Props Y
14. Production schedule including equipment Y Very detailed production schedule. Well split into the 3 areas, with clear
focus. Please add equipment needed for pre-production and post-production
– computer, websites needed etc. Equipment now added at the end.

2. Initial Mark out of 20: 15/20
Overall this could be an excellent piece of pre-production if improvements are made (see notes in red above). Well organised
blog, well done.
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 08/11/17
Student action plan for improvement
I have updated all areas in red.
Final Mark out of 20: 15/20
Some improvements have been made, however not enough to tip this into level 4. A very proficient body of work. Shame you
didn’t use your time to make key improvements.
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 11/01/18