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1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: LOMAX Lewis
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Yes
2. Genre Analysis Yes
3. Target Audience Yes
4. Script Yes
5. Drafts Yes
6. Storyboard No
7. Shotlist Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan Yes
9. Locations Yes
10.Costumes Yes
11.Props Yes
12.Actors Yes
13.Equipment Yes
14.Production schedule Yes
Teachers comments
1. 2 good analyses of film openings Anchorman and Hot Fuzz. Confident
use of technical language throughout, you could add how these film
openings will help you with your product. You need to add one more film
opening analysis from your genre. Analysis of naked gun now added to a
proficient level.
2. Some good research on the history of the genre presented well using
prezi. You could add more on the conventions (you have stated what all
films have, what conventions would be expect to see in a comedy?) and
add awards within the genre.
3. Good research on target audience. Good use of NRS scale and avatar
creator to show stereotypical audience member.
4. Good comedic script. However, some of the formatting has been lost in
the way you have uploaded it. You could try uploading via slideshare so it
maintains the correct formatting. Script updated however some lines,
mostly the action line are still not formatted correctly.
5. Clear evidence of drafting of ideas throughout.
6. No work handed in storyboards still not handed in.
7. No work handed in A comprehensive shot list now uploaded. Great
detail.
8. No work handed in Floor plan now uploaded. Good use of a key and a
good plan. However it is a little busy. You could have separated out the
shots to make it less cluttered.
9. No work handed in Locations now added. Good explanation as to why
each location is used backed up with images.
10.Costume choices explained well with images
11.Prop choices explained well with images

2. 12.Actor choices not given. It says it’s in the powerpoint with costumes and
props, please add this. Actor choices now added. You could have added
images of each person to show their suitability.
13.No work handed in Equipment list now added. Good use of images.
14.No work handed in Production schedule now uploaded. All three areas
covered well. Have you left enough time to edit?
Overall too much work is missing Lewis – please upload all missing work or you
will remain in level 1, incomplete.
Good use of technology throughout. Your blog is well organised with good use
of labels, however all your pre-production work is labelled ‘coursework’.
Please see notes above as how you could improve your work.
Preliminary tasks all completed however please add link to your film.
Labels now added to blog.
Most work has now been uploaded/improved, however:
Storyboards still missing.
Mark out of 20: 7/20 11/20
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 18/12/16 07/02/17
Student action plan for improvement
I corrected my script and I have uploaded everything onto my blog
Final mark out of 20: 11 Date: 07/02/17