3. Research
• The strengths of my research were that it helped me come up with the
layout of my magazine and different way text was formatted. It helped me
design the general layout and helped with imaging. Weakness were I could
have focused on different aspects of the magazine instead of certain ones
4. Planning
• The strengths of my planning were that I was able to understand what
design would be better for my type of magazine. It helped me decide what
format would be best to attract the readers eye and keep it following the
page.
5. Time Management
• for the time I knew I had yes. My project was completed on time but
wasn’t handed in due to me being ill. If I was at 100% I would be able to of
done extra work on it and improve it massively.
6. Aesthetic Qualities
A custom title made for
my magazine to add a
unique touch
After finding a custom font I was
able to create a theme title for
the double spread page
Adding the “next month issue” shows that the
magazine is allows checking what’s going on so it can
be trusted
Having images of the developer
and the game shows the reader
that it’s not just a bunch of
rummers
Custom barcode
which shows the
magazine is fully
committed to its
genre.
7. Audience AppealYes I’ve appealed to my target audience.
This is seen with all the different games
used which are all in the age range but not
below. Also the games used are for my
social-geographic
4 types of games
making sure every
type of audience
enjoys what I would
be provided
Using a large picture of the game make
the reader intrigued in what the game
would look like, additionally the text is in
a way the reader would be able to see the
different between heading at text
9. Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– Aesthetically pleasing
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– The way the text is laid out should be in
transparent boxes
10. Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– No blur anywhere on the magazine
– Good use of text drawing the eye of the reader
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Better looking text in general
– Don’t mess up circles
11. Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– Back spread of 2nd page and words easy to read
– Front page good side stories
– Easy to differentiate
• What improvements could have been made to the
product?
– Have a theme for the magazine like colour palate or
shapes.
– Need a better logo
– Need better colours for the text
– Makes sure the images aren’t touching the text
– Back page is dead, add a blurb
– Have a logo (image for the type of magazine)
12. Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
– I agree about having a theme for my magazine and
also fixing the text in general
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
– Disagree with the circle comment
13. Peer Feedback Summary
– I would start with fixing some boxes around the
text since it would improve the visibility of the
text.
– I would also make the pictures not touch, whilst
also making sure every picture makes sense where
it has been placed
– Finally I would have a logo for my magazine to an
some unique effects
Editor's Notes
What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product?
What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product?
What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time?
What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it?
Discuss the strengths and weaknesses
Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them
Use text boxes and arrows
How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience.
Refer to your findings from your questionnaire.
Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them
Use text boxes and arrows
What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?
