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1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: HASKELL Myles
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis y
2. Genre Analysis y
3. Target Audience y
4. Script y
5. Storyboard y
6. Shotlist y
7. Layouts – floor plan y
8. Locations y
9. Costumes y
10.Props y
11.Actors y
12.Equipment
13.Production schedule y
Teachers comments
1. Hot Fuzz/Raiders of the Lost Ark/Quantum of Solace – some very good
analysis with confident use of technical language showing great
understanding of task. Good detail to how narrative/characters are
introduced. Try to always analyse, there are times when you describe the
action but do not analyse.
2. Some nice detail on genre, with basic key conventions/themes identified.
Presentation is clear with images add. No box office analysis just data.
More needed on history of genre and how genre has reflected
shifts/changes in society.
3. Some detail on target audience, detail based on stereotype. No evidence
of any research into audience.
4. Effective genre script, introduces characters and sets up narrative. Good
dialogue. Please format dialogue correctly.
5. Good storyboard (presentation could be neater). Good technical detail
throughout and variety of shots.
6. Very good detail on shots with lots of info on camera, location, sound and
description. Please rename - Shot List
7. Images and drawings used but no detail on where actors/camera will be
or what scene you are drawing – please redo
8. Image of locations to be used, with some godo detail as to why they were
chosen and suitability for narrative.
9. Costume choices given explanation as to how they will be used in
narrative.
10.Props choices given explanation as to how they will be used in narrative.
11.Actor choices given very brief - add more detail as to why they were
chosen and add images
12.Missing
13.Some nice detail on production schedule with all parts of production
noted – but is 1 day filming and 2 days editing really enough?

2. Overall this is a very good piece of work, well done. Your blog is well organised
with posts clearly labelled.
To get higher mark you need improvements - please see feedback above.
You need to add all missing parts!
Mark out of 20: 14/20
Teacher name: M Drummond Date: Jan 2017
Student action plan for improvement
Genre Analysis-
More on history of genre and how genre has reflected shifts/changes in society.
Some more detail added with some brief analysis of box office.
Script -
Dialogue formatted correctly
Good attempt to present script in correct format
Shot List- Renamed
Yes
Floor Plan- Redone
Post redone, with some detail on position of camera and actors
Actors- More detail and images added.
Good detail on actors and why they were chosen for role
Equipment- completed.
Some good detail on equipment needed for film.
Final mark out of 20: 16 Date: Feb 2017