Lucy, age 17, gave positive feedback on the magazine cover, saying she liked the colors that stood out and attracted her age group. She also liked the positioning of the pictures and thought the text seemed indie-style. Connor and James, both age 17 and 16, also provided feedback on the double page spread, saying they liked the pictures but thought a more exciting font could have been used for the text.

1. Target Audience
Feedback

2. Lucy Oldroyd, 17 years old.
Lucy gave me feedback on my front cover.
She said she loves the colours that I have
used for my magazine as they make the
magazine stand out and attract an
audience, especially for people of her age.
She also said she likes how I used a range
of pictures and how I positioned the 4 at
the bottom of the magazine.
Lucy said that she thinks I could’ve made
the text of the magazine more Indie like
but that you can still tell it is Indie. She said
that she would buy my magazine.

3. Connor Ward, 17 years old and James Ward, 16
years old.
Connor and James both gave me feedback on my
double page spread.
They said they both liked the pictures that I had
used and that they really stand out. James said
that he thought it was good how I had included a
twitter column answering questions from
Kayyah’s fans. Connor also added that the colours
I used all connect from the clothing, to the title to
the key words and that it was clever.
They both said that I should of used a more
exciting font for my text and the font was quite
boring.