1. ABRAHAM TAIWO
POST PRODUCTION FEEDBACK
My post production feedback consists of feedback on all 3 of my magazine pages
from my target audience , saying what's good about the pages and how I can
improve the page.

2. Front cover feedback (1)
The first person I asked for feedback on my magazine
Front page Ebony , said that she liked the front page
Because it looks professional , and I have cluttered the
Page with plenty of pictures she also added that the
Yellow outline on the masthead stands out on the
Purple background and she also likes the choice of the theme colour which is
purple .
She said I could improve this page my making the main cover line more
distinctive because it looks like any other cover line , I agree with this
because the main cover line was not mad too clear because I did not want to
have it running across his body to disrupt the focus on the main image but it
turns out that that would have made it clear that that cover line was the
main one and that ‘L Cookie’ was the main image.

3. Double page spread feed back (1)
When asked Ebony said that she liked the logo of
Subway magazine , she also said that I can improve
My double page spread by making the title stand
Out more . Taking into consideration her point I
Disagree and I think that it was made very clear and
Stood out a lot.

4. Contents page feed back (1)
She also went on to say that the layout of my
contents page was very good and one thing she said
that I should improve and that it was a weakness
was that the colour of that font in the bottom box
was not so clear and that a brighter colour should
have been used instead. I disagree with this because
the colour goes along with the colour scheme and stands out and is very clear
into what the text says.

5. Front cover feed back (2)
The second person that I asked for feedback on my front
cover said that a strength to it was that she likes the choice
of font that I used for the masthead , she said it was very
creative and different which I agree with. She also went on
to say that a weakness and a point to improve would be the
choice of background colour , she said that it would have been
more suitable to use a white background because most
magazines use white. I’ve taken her point into consideration
and I would disagree because I think the colour purple was a
suitable colour to use for the front cover which subsequently
was also the theme colour of my magazine and also went
along with the costumes of ‘L Cookie’ .

6. Double page spread feed back (2)
She said that my double page spread looked very
professional and neat and that the picture that I took of
‘L Cookie’ was good quality which I agree with and she
also said that the gradient background was good.
A weakness and an area for improvement she said would
be if I changed the background on the second page and not use the gradient
tool on it. And also the font on this page . I agree with her because I think
that a plain background would look more presentable , professional and
appeal to my target audience more.

7. Contents page feed back (2)
She also added that my contents page looks good and that
there is nothing that I need to do to improve it. I can
understand why she has said this but I very much do not
agree with this because I feel that the choice of the main
image should have been different because it looks very
similar to that of the front cover , I also think that I should have used a better
colour for the gradient tool as the background.

8. Front cover feed back (3)
This person that I asked for feedback on my magazine
said that the colours on the front page blend very well
and that all the information that my target audience
would want to know is on the front page and also
added the text is very much readable which I agree
with. A area that she said there was room for improvement for was that I
needed to add more photos which would attract more people to buy the
magazine. I do not agree with this because conventionally speaking the vast
amount of music magazines front page only have one main image and no
others on the front page.

9. Double page spread feed back (3)
The feedback that I was also given on my double page
spread was that I should not have too many pictures of
‘L Cookie’ on the second page because he already been
shown on the cover of the magazine , which I can
understand but I disagree because conventionally
speaking the main star of a magazine is shown in
more than one place in the magazine. She also said that everything stands out
on the two pages and instantly would instigate my target market to read on.

10. Contents page feed back (3)
The feedback that I was given on my contents page was
that the information that was presented was good and
gets straight to the point. And area she said I need to
improve and could be seen as a weakness would be the
variation of pictures and that too many of them are of
‘L Cookie’ and I disagree with this because he is the
main topic of these issue of subway magazine and therefore should be depicted
in many areas of the magazine.

11. Front cover feedback 4
The feedback that I received on the front page of my
music magazine was that it was very appealing , an area
that I was told was a weakness and an area for
improvement was increasing the size of the font which
says what the price is ; I disagree with this because the
purpose of using a small font for the price would be so that regardless of how
big the font is it would still appear that the price is small because it has been
put in a small font.

12. Double page spread feed back (4)
Feedback that I have received on the double page
spread was that the image on the first page was very
good , the colour scheme consistency was also good
here and not too busy. An area I was given improvement
was that I should reduce the amount of text that I had
on these pages , which I disagree with because I believe that I ha a reasonable
amount of text on both pages and that it was not too much.

13. Contents page feed back (4)
The feedback that I received on my contents page was
that I would need to make the headings in the boxes at
the bottom of the page more clear by changing the font
colour , I disagree with this because I think it was very
clear and it also goes with the colour scheme of my
magazine. Other than that I was told there was nothing else wrong with it.