2. My original idea looked like the the double page spread i have previously been uploading.
After getting feedback on it i realised that even though this is what i wanted i was still missing
things out that were needed so therefore i needed to improve my double page spread so that
it looked better and proffessional.
This is originally the way my double page looked like, even though this is how i planned it
looked like i could still tell that it was missing something. Not even that but noticing that little
things i had missed out too which are main things for a double page in a magazine so i needed
to make sure that i had edited this so that it looked better and included what was needed.
3. To improve on what i need to do this is what i changed my double page spread to look like.
Already looking at this i can tell that this is betetr than the one i produced before because it
doesnt look so empty. The font i have used have changed for what are more important than
the rest, so this could be the subheading of my double page spread. Not only this but i have
added little text which shows who wrote the text and who took the picture; This makes the
double page spread look offical and more proffesional. I improved the first letter by using a
dropcap so that it looked better and more like a magazine. Adding these imporvements makes
my double page spread look more suitable for a magazine that someone would buy.
