This document provides feedback from a teacher to a student, Joshua Coupland, on his pre-production tasks for a music video. The teacher comments that Joshua needs to improve several areas, including using music video theory more fully in his analysis, addressing feedback received, adding citations, analyzing album covers and ads more deeply, including technical language in storyboards and shots, and providing more details in several tasks. The initial mark is 7 out of 20 and no improvements were made based on the feedback, so the final mark remains 7 out of 20. The teacher expresses disappointment that Joshua did not take advantage of the feedback to strengthen his work.