This document provides feedback on a student's pre-production tasks for a music video project. The feedback comments that the student has provided evidence for research on similar products, genre analysis, target audience, annotated lyrics, drafts, storyboards, shotlist, layouts, locations, costumes, props, actors, and equipment. However, the teacher requests more detail in the genre analysis and application of Goodwin's six aspects of music videos. The student is asked to relabel some posts for clarity and rotate an image for readability. Additional feedback praises the target audience research, storyboards, and shotlist. The initial mark is 5/20 with notes for improvement. The student action plan addresses the feedback and the final mark