The document provides feedback on a student's pre-production tasks for a music video project. It summarizes the teacher's comments on 14 individual tasks related to research, planning, storyboarding, scheduling and other pre-production elements. The teacher provides positive feedback and notes areas for improvement. The student makes the requested revisions and improvements, earning an increased final mark of 17/20. The teacher praises the overall excellent body of pre-production work completed.

1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback Student Name: COLLINS Chloe
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Blog Teacher comments:
1. Similar Products:1 music video analysis inc.
Goodwin
Y Missing? You cannot use your Alanis Morrisette analysis from before
summer. Please use a song from within your genre. Excellent analysis of Ho
Hey by The Lumineers. Good application of Goodwin through screen grabs.
Excellent technical analysis.
2. Ideas visualisation feedback and initial ideas Y Good post explaining peers thoughts. Will you use any of the ideas
suggested? Feedback and ideas now expanded on well.
3. Genre Research Y Well detailed prezi, good use of images to enhance your points. You could
hyperlink the examples or embed the examples so they can be watched
form within the prezi. Please hyperlink the link on your blog to make this
easier to access. Please add a citation section – what websites did you get
your info from? Prezi now hyperlinked. Sources now cited.
4. Target Audience Y Excellent visualisation of your stereotypical audience. Good use of
questionnaire. Please add report on what you found out from your results.
How will you use this going forward into your video, digipak and poster?
Some good analysis of your results. Good focus on style of your genre/artist.
5. Digipak and advert analysis (2 of each) Y Good clear annotations and analysis of a mixture of covers/posters from
within your genre. Good level of detail. You could add meanings behind
things such as colour and imagery and what we could infer from that. More
detail on colour and imagery now added, well done, clear analysis.
6. Annotated lyrics Y Well annotated lyrics showing key words and your ideas for your video.
Clear and concise with good detail.
7. Storyboards Y Excellent clear storyboards, shows narrative line well. You could add arrows
to show camera movements such as panning. Please rotate them so they
are up the right way. Boards now rotated and camera movements now
added to the visuals, well done.
8. Shot list Y Very detailed clear shot list, shows your vision well.
9. Locations recce Y Good clear recce, excellent photos with clear explanations of scenes to be
filmed there. Good additional notes on risks that may occur whilst on
location.
10. Floor plans Y Excellent detailed floor plans, great attention to detail. Please add a key to
show what the symbols mean and also rotate the images so they are the
right way up. Images now rotated, key added although could be clearer.
11. Costume Y Done together on Emaze. Well presented, good use of images to show the
look you are going for. Spelling of ‘torch’ wrong on props page - corrected12. Actors
13. Props

2. 14. Production schedule including equipment Y Good clear production schedule showing the process well. Please add pre-
production section. Fantastic detail split into 3 well detailed sections, well
done.
Initial Mark out of 20: 14/20
Overall a proficient well labelled blog, well done. See feedback in red for improvements
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 08/11/17
Student action plan for improvement
All corrections done and are on my blog. Apart from my Prezi which I can’t upload as an embedded link but references to websi tes are on
the bottom of some slides.
Final mark out of 20: 17/20
Improvements have been made well using initial feedback. Overall an excellent body of pre-production work.
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 11/01/18