This document provides feedback from a teacher on a student's pre-production work for a music video project. The teacher notes that most tasks were completed well, including research, planning, storyboards, schedules. Areas needing improvement included adding more details to the storyboard, target audience description, and equipment list. The student made revisions based on the feedback, and the teacher increased the final mark from 16/20 to 17/20.

1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: ATKINSON Thomas
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – music video analysis y
2. Genre Analysis (including genre & digipak research) y
3. Target Audience y
4. Annotated lyrics y
5. Drafts y
6. Storyboards incomplete
7. Shotlist y
8. Layouts – floor plan y
9. Locations y
10.Costumes y
11.Props y
12.Actors y
13.Equipment y
14.Production schedule y
Teachers comments
1. Excellent Prezi analysing ‘Don’t Look Back in Anger’ by Oasis and LCD
Soundsystem. Excellent use of all aspects of Goodwin’s theory – could
have used screen grabs as evidence to the analysis.
2. Fantastic genre analysis of Alternative Rock using Prezi, excellent
detailed research. Genre has been broken down to sub-genres and
influences on audience and popular culture. Images used throughout.
Post has been added on digipaks and adverts which again show good,
clear understanding of task and conventions used.
3. Some detail into audience but info seems to be based on stereotype, no
evidence of physical evidence – please add
4. Lyrics have been annotated analysed well showing initial ideas.
5. Good evidence of ideas drafting. You could add your thoughts to the post
it note exercise, what did you think of other peoples suggestions?
6. Storyboard shows action with good technical detail, however you need to
have minimum of 4 sheets. – please complete
7. Fantastic shot list with very good detail with obvious links to the narrative.
8. Comprehensive floorplans detailing the main actions well.
9. Great detail on location choices with good info on choices.
10.Costume choices explained well with images.
11.Great detail and images showing prop choices.
12.Good detail on choice of actors with images included.
13.Missing
14.Production schedule is complete and great detail for all parts of
production.
Overall this is an excellent body of work, well done. Great use of technologies
throughout. At this stage you are just missing an equipment list showing what
you will use during the production stage. You also need to add more detail to:
target audience, ideas drafting and storyboard.

2. You could add additional content such as a risk assessment.
Good clear blog that is easy to navigate.
Mark out of 20: 16/20
Teacher name: M Drummond Date: Jan 2017
Student action plan for improvement
 Added equipment list – list now added with key equipment, brief detail
added
 Improvement on post-it exercise – brief detail added with some reflection
on peer comments
 Improvement to target audience – some improvement but still no
evidence of actual research.
Final mark out of 20: 17 Date: Feb 2017