This document provides feedback from a teacher to a student on their pre-production work for a music video project. The teacher comments that some areas of the student's work showed good research and planning, but many parts lacked sufficient detail, analysis or examples. The teacher provides specific feedback on each of the 14 pre-production tasks, noting what was done well and improvements needed. Areas identified as needing more work included deeper analysis, additional details, sources, images and linking locations to the narrative. The student is given an initial mark of 10 out of 20 and asked to improve their work in key areas identified by the teacher.