This document provides feedback from a teacher to a student, Samuel Frullo, on pre-production tasks for a film project. The teacher provides comments on each of the 14 tasks, noting what was done well and improvements that could be made. Areas identified for improvement include adding another film opening analysis, providing visual details for script voiceovers, re-scanning storyboards, reordering the shot list, and adding more details to locations, costumes, props, and the production schedule. The student receives marks of 12/20 and 14/20 and creates an action plan to address the areas for improvement identified by the teacher.

1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: FRULLO Samuel
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Some
2. Genre Analysis Yes
3. Target Audience Yes
4. Script Yes
5. Drafts Yes
6. Storyboard Yes
7. Shotlist Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan Yes
9. Locations Yes
10.Costumes Yes
11.Props Yes
12.Actors Yes
13.Equipment Yes
14.Production schedule Yes
Teachers comments
1. 2 excellent analyses of film openings Django Unchained and Hot
Fuzz. Fantastic and condfident use of technical language throughout.
You need to add one more film opening analysis from your genre.
2. Comprehensive history of the genre presented well using prezi.
Good inclusion of key films within the genre.
3. Good research on target audience. Good use of NRS scale and
avatar creators to show age ranges of your target male audience.
4. A well written voiceover. Will there be visuals over the top of this?
If so they need to be detailed in the script. Please see me for help with
this. Script now formatted correctly. Action line do not need to be
underlines or bold but are in the correct position.
5. Clear evidence of drafting of ideas throughout.
6. A good set of storyboards, they need to be re-scanned so they are
easier to read, some scenes cant be read at the moment. Storyboards
now re-scanned and are clear to read. Dialogue box could be filled in
with more detail.
7. A basic shot list has been uploaded. Shot lists need to go in the
order they will appear eg 1-22, not jump around. Will you only use 11
shots in your whole 2 minute opening? Shot list now updated in the
correct order. Will you only use 13 shots?
8. Good clear floor plans of main location, you have written you will
add a second location plan, please add this. Second location floor plan
now added.
9. Main location choices explained well, you have written you need to
add more, please add this. Second location images and choices now
added.
10. Costume choices explained well, you could add images. Images
now added.

2. 11. Prop choices explained well, you could add reasons for choices
and images. Images and choices now added.
12. Actor choices explained well with good head shots.
13. Equipment is detailed briefly in the production schedule. You could
do this as a separate post with more detail.
14. A basic production schedule has been added. You could include
all the stages of work (pre-production and evaluations). You need to
break down the production stage. What scenes will you film on which
days? Do you have any back up days planned? Production schedule now
updated to show all 3 sections clearly.
Overall this is a proficient body of work, well done Sam. Good use of
technology throughout. Your blog is well organised with good use of
labels, however all your pre-production work is labelled ‘coursework’.
Please see notes above as how you could improve your work.
Preliminary tasks all completed and blogged – however please add
working link of your film to your blog.
Preliminary film now blogged.
Labels now amended and clearer.
All work has been uploaded and improved. You have not added another
film opening analysis. However main work is completed to a proficient
level.
Mark out of 20: 12/20 14/20
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 18/12/16 07/02/17
Student action plan for improvement
1.One more film opening analysis
4. Visuals in script
6. Re-scan storyboard
7. Shot list in order
8. Do second location plan
9. Do second location
10. Add images to costumes
11. Add reasons for props
14. Add more detail to production schedule
Change labels
Add link to film on blog
Final mark out of 20: 14 Date: 07/02/17