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1. Production Reflection
Andreas Mina

2. Process Week 1
In this week, we were introduced to the FMP project. I started off with planning my work, by creating three
potential ideas for my short film. I had an idea from the Easter holiday and put that in a separate graph, to
see what I could come up with on a different graph in college. I had an idea of having an action sequence
film, but the plot of it would have been hard to fit in a short amount of time, as I would have needed to
explain the reason or the fight, how I got to where I am, and the result. So I decided to make a mood board
of two new ideas. One involving someone shooting an intruder, and the other involves hitting someone over
a baseball bat in a surprise party. They both have very similar plots. As they both end with misunderstanding
moments, and a mix of tense and comedic genres. I chose the baseball party one, as it seems more realistic,
and less forceful within the story, as someone with a gun doesn't seem to be realistic in the UK seen as they
are banned. From this, I figured out what I want to do for my final project. I learnt how to expand my ideas
from the spider graphs, by sectioning off the mise en scene. After this, I moved onto the initial plans. In my
initial plans, I had reacted to the unit explanation. In this, I had talked about what I want to do, and why I
want to do that thing. In this I stated that I want to do a Short film, and why I want to do it. From this, I
learnt what I want to potentially make. It did help me, as it did give me a wider range of idea of what I want
to do. After the reaction, I had created mood boards, based from my final mind map. I made five mood
boards, based from the sections of mise en scene; camera shots, techniques, props and costume, location,
and a storyboard. In this, I would get screen shots of examples of what I want, then explain why I like it and
how I will use it in my short film. This gave me an idea of what I would include in my film, and where to set it.
It will later on help me with setting it. After I did my storyboard, I moved onto the research. With the
research, I had researched into five existing products that are fairly similar to mine. In this, I would explain
the mise en scene and camera work used in the individual films, and why it was used to fit in the films. I
watched the clips and picked out points . This helped me understand how other films would create meaning
to meet their individual intentions. It helps me with adding filming technics to my short film, as I've been
given the inspiration to include new camera work within reason. After the Initial plans, I moved onto the
research. in the research, I looked at five existing products, and talked about the mise en scene involved in
them. I would then compare them all. this would help me realize what I could bring on board to my short
film.

3. I would pick out the camera Techniques used in the individual short films, and look at how they are used in
the story, and how it fits in with the situation and mood of it. Jaws use a POV of the shark, to see what its
aiming at. From this, I learnt about how the films communicate the mood through the camera work, for
example, the dolly zoom is used in jaws to add a dramatic zoom to a shocked face. for my for my future, I can
use these camera effects in my short film, to add the effects to fit with the suspense mood. In my opinion, I
believed that this helped me develop my understanding of the mise en scene, as the research gives me
examples of how its used to fit with the individual films. After the research, I moved onto making the
questionnaire. For this, I needed to ask 10 questions that will conclude my target audience. I mainly asked
about how they favor the comedy genre, and what are their favorite comedy films. this was so that I could
get an idea of the films they like, so that I could compare my film to the films the surveyors suggested. from
this, I learnt about the different types of films that my audience like, and how they rate the genre as a
whole. This gives me an idea of who my film is targeted at. I didn't manage to get many reviews at college, so
I promoted it on Instagram. this gave me roughly 14 more general public to answer my survey. The
promotion was a good idea, as I'm getting reviews from the general public (people who follow me), rather
than just people from my class who fully understand what I'm talking about.

4. Week 1
Three Elements:
Survey
Research
Initial plans
Strengths:
The thing that went well with the survey would be the advertisement. Advertising it on Instagram brought in more than ten
surveyors to the survey. This gave me information on the general public of random interests age and gender; rather than
just students of the course, who are all similar age of me, and are interested in media. For the research, the strength would
be comparing all of the researched items. This helped me realise what pattern that I like and what common features I can
add in my film, it also shows me the theme I'm going for the film too, helping me create an environment for it. Lastly, the
initial plans. The strength involved with that would be the mind maps. I believe that it helped me web my ideas up, and it
also helped me organise my mise en scene list as its in its different sections. This helped me with creating the mood board,
as I could annotate from the points I listed from the mise en scene.
Weakness:
The thing that didn’t go as well with my survey would be linking two questions else, as it would mean me having to re
analyse all 26 surveyors choices for each question. With the research, my weakness was with finding existing products to
link with mine. I was attempting to research a product with a very similar story and meet a lot of my intentions, but I
couldn’t think of a film that did that which was leaving me having to look at films with specific bits that I want from separate
films. This make it hard to link to my FMP, as the film I'm researching uses the technic with different intentions. Lastly, The
initial plans. My weakness would be creating the Mood boards. Even though I explained Why I chose the image, I failed to
talk about how the intention fits in with my project. This made my work look quite basic, and will make me struggle when
coming for my experiments and pre production, as I don’t know why I would want that technique.
Improvements:
I would like to firstly improve on my Initial plans mood bard. I want to add more detail in the explanation side of the mood
board, by talking about why it fits with my film, and how it will benefit me with my FMP. This will help me for when I move
onto my pre production, as it will prepare me for planning on using the technics and why I'm using them I need to improve
on the questionnaire, as I've noticed some typing mistakes in the questions that I need to fix and I need to make it fit for the
wider audience, rather than the media students. For next time, I will hopefully have a wide range of people doing my
survey, and I will be able to close it and conclude it.

5. Process Week 2
In this week, we had started on our experiments. Before I moved onto that, I had finished off sections of my
research. I had got all of my information from my survey and analyzed each question. The majority of the
same or similar answers, would show me who my target audience is, and what they would like about my
Short film. From this, I had gotten a rough idea on who my Audience is based on. This will help me when
writing up my proposal, to conclude my target audience. I also looked at every question in the survey and
concluded what the results showed me. On some, I had o look at what the separate surveyors answered, so I
can see their activity and compare it to the other surveyors. from this, I had concluded based on what the
surveyors similarly chose for the other questions, and looked at their age, gender and personality. This was
successful, as it narrowed down the target audience for the specific questions that I had narrowed it down
on. After I sorted the research, I moved onto the experiments. In the experiments, I chose to look at three
separate technics for my short film. I decided to look at a dolly zoom, a POV, and a shaky camera technique.
These are the techniques I intend on using in my film. The experiment is half finished, as I haven’t looked at
the shaky camera. In the experiment, I had practiced doing these technics using different cameras. I used a
cannon camera from college and a go pro, which I brought from home. I wanted to see which cameras
worked for the different shots. In this week, I looked at two of my intentional techniques. I looked at the
POV shots, and a dolly zoom. I practiced doing both. With the POV shot, I used three different cameras and
walked down the corridor with THEM. I started with the cannon camera. I this was a better handling
compared to the others, as it needed two hands to be held. With the Go pro, I tried different handles for it. I
tried the body strap and the arm strap. The body strap was too low, and the arm strap didn’t show a head
POV, so I stuck to holding the camera high up on a small tri pod. This was effective, as it was looking strait
ahead, and bounced about, like it was moving like a POV. From this, I learnt how to improvise with the go
pro when you don’t have the right kit, by just using what you've got and by adjusting the settings on the go
pro to get a similar definition to the camera.

6. This will come in useful hand if I don’t get the available kit that I've requested. I then moved onto practicing
the dolly zoom shot. I started by practicing the shot different equipment. I used the slider to start of with. It
managed to stay facing forwards, but moving it was jerky. I also did another technique, where I shortened
the leg of a tri- pod, and angled the camera to stay in the same position. This didn’t work, as it made the
footage look like it was jumping over a hill. After I did this Dolly zoom, I tried doing it with the go pro. I had
placed it close to me and I move forward. The Go pro provided a fish eye effect, which gave a curve age for
the editing. The effect didn’t work, from the distance it was filmed and the speed it moved. I will retry it
from a slower speed, and a stable closer shot to the person. I also tried the walkthrough shots. I started with
using the slider for the shot. I got a student to walk sideways whilst I moved the camera on the slider. I
though that it was very jerky, as it kept getting stuck when moving it side ways. I don’t believe that the slider
was effective for the walkthrough, as its too short to track the person movement, and it keeps getting stuck
in position. This helped me realize that panning is the better alternate, as its less stiff, has better movement
and its more lighter to carry compared to a tri pod and slider with it.

7. Three elements
Experiments
Practical
Audience research
Strengths:
The first strength will be for the experiments. The one thing which worked with it at would be figuring out which
equipment is the right one to use. I had compared them to see which was better, and which had the most
weaknesses in them which helped me conclude which camera and technique I want to use. With the practical
side of the experiment, the thing which worked well would be putting the go pro to good use. The practice
helped me realise the techniques in which I can use my go pro; for example, a 4k dolly zoom or a POV. With the
audience research, the strength would be the conclusion at the end. This will help me with my proposal as it
will show to me what my audience likes and doesn’t to help me realise who I'm actually targeting my film to.
Weakness
The first weakness would be from the experiments Practical. I struggled with making the dolly zoom effect. I did try
different techniques to see which one was right for me to use. I tried using the slider but I found that to be a bit
stiff. The two legged system, made the footage look like it was hopping. The manual edited way didn’t look very
effective, so I’m going to have to re think with the dolly zoom. With the experiments, the weakness would be
involved with the editing of the dolly zoom. The footage was a bit blurry, so it made it hard to have a clear
effect. Also, the footage was too fast. This made it hard to tell that the footage is a dolly zoom. Lastly, the
audience research. With the individual survey results. I struggled to put the pieces together, as it meant me to
look at the activity of the surveyors and compare them individually. This took time to do, for me to reach my
conclusion.
Next time
For next week, I will continue to practice on the dolly zoom, by making the camera at a slower pace and closer to
have an easy edit. I will also continue to experiment on fonts and on the poster and the colour scheme for the
film. This will help me with improving my skills to make it a better shot when it comes to production. I would
also like to improve on the pov. I would like to try out more alternate ways of doing it (E.g. using the shoulder
mount), to see if there are better solutions of having a steady shot.

8. Process week 3
In this week, we carried on with the experiments. Before the experiments, I had finished my interviews with
two separate people. i recorded one of the interviews and I had another interview via outlook. I decided to
interview two people with different interests. One person was from the same course as me and the other
was my farther who is basically a part of the general public. This gave me opinions from someone who
understands what I'm doing, and one who is seeing it for the first time. This gave me opinions from two
different sides, which turned out to be similar__. I had started on my third experiment, which was the
walkthrough sequence. In this, I used My go pro again, and I used the shoulder mount and the cannon
camera. I also got a fellow student to do the actions for the camera. With the shoulder mount, I also did a re
try of the dolly zoom with the shoulder mount, after doing more research. I thought that it would be more
effective if I had filmed it from the waist up whilst keeping it as a forward direction. I Then edited it on
premier pro, by enlarging the image smaller, whilst zooming in. The new technic was a lot more effective
with the shoulder mount, as it was more stable and less shaky, which gave me the opportunity to have a
better edit of the video. With the walkthrough, I used different techniques and two cameras for it. I walked
backwards whilst filming someone walking towards the shot. I also decided to tilt the camera, to see if the
shot looked more distressing. With the cannon, I used a shoulder mount to have a stronger and still support
to the arm. It was stable and comfortable to hold, as it stood still from the support of my shoulder. It gave a
steady and smooth look when filming compared to the go pro which was too circular and shaky. This helped
me decide on what I would like to use when coming to the walkthrough scene. After I finished filming with
the cameras, I moved onto the look and sound experiments. The first look I sorted would be the color of the
film I edited the walkthrough to have a new tint of colour. I used the RGB curves tool to attempt to have the
bland colour effect I'm looking for.

9. I toned down each colour to make it darker in the frame. It made the scene lack brightness, which made the
video look more sinister. The colour scheme worked well with my intentions, as the removal of the light
brings in a dark and eerie environment to the clip. I will put the effect in my final film to create the eerie
environment during the tension scenes. I lastly played with the logo font. I Made a working title (someone's
in my house). With the title I downloaded some fonts from Da font and re wrote the same title with newer
fonts. When I found the font that I want, I played around with the shape tool and changed the shape of the
H to a house. This was to see what I could do to the logo to make it creative.mn intend to change one of the
letters of the logo to relate to the title of the film. This effect will firstly, stop the logo from looking generic,
and secondly, to create meaning to the title. The edited letter will link to something to the film, and will link
to the themeing of the title, to make it tease or hint about something in the film. In this case, the balloon
represents the surprise party later on.

10. 3elements
Shoulder mount
Logo practice
Interviews
Strengths
The strengths with using the shoulder mount would be that it provided me with good stability for the shot when
practicing. When filming with it, it was a comfortable hold as it had a shoulder rest to lean it on. Also, it made the
shot look less shaky than before without the shoulder mount. With practicing with the logo. The strength would be
the creative aspect I had when creating it. The house that I sketch out on the logo worked to make the logo have
more character and look more original. It fitted well with the theme of the film, as its set in a house. With the
interviews, the strength would be the conclusion of what this tells me about my audience. This helped me with
narrowing down about what my audience want to see in my film and how I can target it towards them.
Weaknesses
The weakness with the shoulder mount would be two minor issues, the size, and the location of the mount. The size
may be an issue with transportation, as it means that I have too much to carry, and the shoulder mounting area
was an issue, as it was placed on the right hand side. Being left handed, I would have preferred it on the left as I'm
more comfortable using it on that side. With the logo practice, the weakness would be coming up with a name for
it. The practice name is way too long for film, and isn't very unique; and I'm struggling to think of a new name to
replace this current one. Lastly, the interviews. The weakness with this would be the effort o go through with the
recording. I struggled with firstly, copying down word to word what the recording said, as it mumbles in some
sentences, and secondly, getting it available to the computers, as it doesn’t work on separate PCs in which I later
found out, so I had to keep it in a separate file.
Improvements
For next week there isn't really much to improve. I would like to consider a new working title for the film, seen as
this current one is boring and not remember able. I would like to improve my skills with the shoulder mount. By
this, I mean getting the hang of using it, so I’m prepared when it comes to filming. For next time, I will use the
information I have gotten on my audience research and include it to my proposal to conclude my target audience.
Lastly, I will improve the logo idea. After the new name, I will put items or themeing in the logo in order to make it
more creative and relative to the film.

11. Process Week 4In this week, we started on our proposals. In this, I state who my target audience is based on and what I will do in the
project. I look at the demographics of my survey and include the information on the target audience. For the age
and gender. I mainly based that on stereotype, as that’s more of an audience choice which would naturally fit with
a film. The thing that didn’t work would be the geodemographics for my audience. Its hard to find out who likes my
film based on region, as my film isn't set for any region. The class audience was based on the style of the character,
seen as he has a normal suburban house, I based that the higher class would be drawn into it more as they would
usually live in normal suburban houses. I believe that the Target audience was successful seen as it matches some
of my films intentions. After I did the target audience, I moved onto the rational. On this, I basically stated what I've
developed from past experience. I mainly state the camera techniques I gained from doing the short film project
which I want to bring again in this one. After the rationale, I state on what I'm making and what I need to research
into this project. It does state what I've been doing in the previous slides, and helps remind me that I've done that
work, so I don’t need to worry about it. I then state how I'm evaluating it. The thing that went well with the
proposal would be the audience, as it covers and concludes as a whole and easily narrows down on who my target
is based on. After the proposal, I moved onto the pre production. With the pre production, I firstly start on my style
sheet for the movie. In this, I got images of films involving a dull colour scenery and created a colour scene using
Photoshop. When making it, I just picked out some colours from the screen shotted image and made a palette with
it. I then mixed the pallets from the different screenshots to give me a potential idea of what I want. It showed me
what tone I should have on the film, and what effect it gives out. With the locations, I decided to get images of
Birdseye view of the house and plan some of the scenes. I had put shapes in the image to represent where
everything should go. I did it for every scene in the film. This will give me a rough idea of where everything should
be place in terms of equipment. This will come useful when I start filming. I also annotated the areas that I'm
filming in. I talk about what is useful about it and what will happen there. I also put an image of the location next
to the text to show what I'm talking about. This shows to me why my locations work and the reasons I'm filming
there. This will help me with filming so I know about the benefits of placing the camera in the certain area. For the
poster planning, I talk about what I want it to look like and why it will look like that. I talk about linking it to the
colour scene and the font used in it. For the font, I write the name of the film with it to show how it will
intentionally look. With the explanation of why I believe that its the right font will make the image show why the
name fit with the font. The poster planning shows the intentions that will be added into it and how it will all link
together. This helps me with adding the detail in my poster. Lastly, I move onto the sound. I talk about the diegetic
and non diegetic sound that will go into the film.

12. I also put an image of the location next to the text to
show what I'm talking about. This shows to me why my
locations work and the reasons I'm filming there. This
will help me with filming so I know about the benefits
of placing the camera in the certain area. For the poster
planning, I talk about what I want it to look like and
why it will look like that. I talk about linking it to the
colour scene and the font used in it. For the font, I
write the name of the film with it to show how it will
intentionally look. With the explanation of why I believe
that its the right font will make the image show why the
name fit with the font. The poster planning shows the
intentions that will be added into it and how it will all
link together. This helps me with adding the detail in my
poster. Lastly, I move onto the sound. I talk about the
diegetic and non diegetic sound that will go into the
film. I expand on it describing why I've decided to
get/make the sound that certain way and including links
to the sounds I've found. This shows the path I will take
and the plan B I have if anything goes wrong. It will
later help me with finding the sounds and the
alternative path to go down if anything goes wrong.
During the weekend, I start producing the film. I didn’t
film in chronological order. I started with the first
scene.

13. I managed to get someone to help film and I also managed to get a gather of people for the surprise scene. I
filmed the extra long shot and the character exiting the house scene. I decided to change the medium shot
to a pan shot of the character leaving the street, so the scenery will look more familiar. The effect did work,
as it shows where everything was placed in the scene which helps for understanding the placing of the tense
and running scene later on in the film. I then moved onto the surprise sequence. I did this scene earlier, as it
has the most people involved in the film, and I wanted to dismiss them as soon as possible so they weren't
tired. With the scene, I used the go pro, as it gave a lighter look compared to the cannon. With the go pro, I
got the five people to say surprise, whilst the character was stood there with a bat and someone on the floor
unconscious. I had placed the camera in three places; one was on the stairs, to show everyone together; the
next on the surprises to see their reactions; and the last on the character to see what he has done. The first
shot worked, as it shows a quick clip of the inside scene together. The second shot didn’t work, as it the shot
was too close to the characters. If I filmed it further, It would have made it more clearer for where the
characters were placed. This would have made the scene make more sense. The last shot did work, as it
made it more clearer for what the character has done, seen as they were both perfectly in the frame. After
the inside scene, I moved back into the outside routine. I started with the scene where the character walks
back home. I filmed with a long shot of the character walking back, to show where he entered the street
from. The scene did work, but I had some issues with filming it. Many cars kept entering and pulling into the
curve. This was an issue for time consuming, as I had to keep re shooting the shot, so there weren't cars in
the way.

14. After the walkthrough scene, I moved onto the dolly zoom. I used the shoulder mount, and got someone to
film from the waist high, so that it isn’t blurred when zooming into the shot. The shot took a few takes,
so that I could have a good reaction. The shoulder mount did help for the dolly zoom and the
walkthrough, as it provided a fair amount of stability of the camera to zoom in the face and follow a
character. After the dolly zoom, I did the running sequence. I managed to use a pan shot and some
medium shots of the beginning and end of the sequence. The issue with it was that it was too short of a
run, as I’m running from one sidewalk to the opposite one. I will try to fix it by adding cut shots of what
the character saw in the window, to make it more dramatic and tense, knowing that the character has
this stuck in his head. I then did the pov with the go pro. I had the headset and the go pro attached to it.
I then did the walking scene. The shot didn’t work, seen as the shot was too high, and barely showed
the character walking. I moved onto the last two scenes. I did the insert shot and the last scene of the
character entering the house. The insert shot managed to link well with the walkthrough, as it shows
what the character was looking at, and builds suspension, knowing that the character will use it as a
weapon. The last scene had to be quick, so the inside of the house isn't reviled. The character entering
quickly works, as it happens suddenly, which ends up breaking the tension to transition to the action.

15. 3 elements
Proposal
Pre production
Making the film video
Strengths
With the proposal, the strength would be concluding the audience through age range, gender and class.
These audiences were easy to find out, as my research backed me up, from seeing the similar films that
target their audiences. This helped me to link the ages and which gender the film appeals to the most. For
the pre production, the strength would be from the shot list . The shot list is what gives me the clearest idea
of what my film will look like, as it directs the shot, the length of the scene, what happens and the shot
being shown. This will help me the most to directing what will happen in the film. With creating the film, the
strength would be producing the shots intended. I believe that the film followed the shot list very well, as
the shots followed the intensions that the shot list was looking for.
Weakness
With the proposal, the weakness is from the target audience. I struggled to figure out the geodemographics
and class of my audience are. With the class, I was struggling to link it to my film, till I realised about my
characters lifestyles. With the location, I couldn’t relate it to my film, as it isn’t referencing an area, or
related to a certain area, so I couldn’t relate the location to an audience. lastly, making the video. I feel like it
was a bit rushed. The reason is because of the footage is a bit shaky and there wasn’t enough takes taken for
each scene, so I'm limited with choice with the scenes. Lastly, the pre production. The weakness is from the
story board, I struggled with creating it online, as it takes such a long process to make, as I have to do it 6
frames at a time, and find individual images for each scene,; so online storyboards are time consuming
processes.

16. Next time
To improve for next week, I will firstly, put the footage into the software so that I can start
editing on it, and colour it. Also, I would like to improve on the call sheet. I need to look over it,
and add the casts that I've included in the film. I also need to annotate the location areas in the
pre production slide. I need to state what will be happening in the scene and where everything
will be placed in the area.

17. Process week 5
In this week, I started with Putting my film on premier pro. I put the clips in order and viewed it before I
edited it together. I discovered that the footage was too short and filled with shaky camera work. There are
some scenes in it which don’t match the next. From seeing what I've seed, I've decided to abolish the film I
filmed last week and re create it. I've decided to abolish it, as its hard to add on to it, seen as it was filmed in
Derby which is quite far from York. If I did film it in york, then I’d add onto it seen as it wouldn’t be hard work
to organize where to locate the scene. I've planned more scenes to include in the film which will take place
in the college and more footage in the house. I've decided to show the character going to college where his
friend tells him happy birthday there. This new scene will show the audience where the character is going,
and how its his birthday. I will also change the burglar realization scene. I will do it so that the character text
someone that he knows that he’s seen someone; the text will tell him to sort out the situation rather than
call the police. This will link to the surprise party inside his house, as the person texting the main character is
clearly in on it. I think these new changes will stop the film from looking rushed and will make it look more
understandable, as I'm adding these new scenes to link what is happening and why its occurring. I then
moved on to sorting out my logo for the film. I had written it down in the font that I wanted and coloured it
in gray. I believe that gray is a neutral colour that can blend in well with anything. Also, I didn’t use red, as its
hard to blend with the band poster and because it represents blood and gore which my film isn’t about. I
then changed the I into a balloon. This related to the theme of party's which links to the end of my film. I
also included the bat to reference the weapon used by the character whish is cut out of the letters in the
logo. The logo has a shining finishing look, which will make it look more bold when against an existing image.
The thing that worked with the logo would be the balloon. It Stops the text from looking boring and like
standard text; it makes it look mysterious to where the balloon comes into place with the film. After the text,
I moved onto the re done shot list. In this, I added in more shots compared to the last one. I've added onto
the scene where the character enters the house to have more tension and unexpected scenes to be involve
to build up to the surprise.

18. I've also added scenes to link to why certain situations are the way they are. One example would be the bat
scene. Before he picks it up from the front of the house. Instead, he goes into the garage and gets it. The
thing that worked would be the re arranging with scenes. Now, it explains where the character is going, and
why he acts the way he does. After the shot list, I moved onto the re done storyboard. I decided sketch it out
this time ,as its quicker, and I can create what I want to make instead of putting images together. I then
moved onto the locations for the second film. Instead of doing a location plan for every scene like the
previous planning I did, I did one for every shot. Doing every scene required me to get images of a satellite
image of my house and for me to draw a map of the inside scenes This gave me a better idea of where to
place everything when it comes to filming and will show me where everything should intentionally be placed
when it comes to filming.

19. 3 elements
Filming
Re doing pre production
Shot list
Strengths
With the first take of the film, the good thing that did actually work about the film would be the story. It
managed to show a clear story that the character is going in the house to hit the burglar; this doesn’t regard
the fact that it needs major improvement doing to it. With the pre production, the strength would come
down to the organisation. This plan is a lot more organised compared to the other, as it shows the birds eye
location for every scene and a new scene breakdown. This is now giving me better directions of where to
place the camera, as it shows me for every scene, unlike last time, where I based the birds eye view from
every scene. With the shot list, it is divided into every scene. This division helps me with filming, so that I
know how long each scene is supposed to last for.
Weakness
The weakness I had with the film would come down to many things. The main reason is because its too short
and many scenes are quite shaky. Also, some things need to be re scripted, for example how he gets the bat,
as it makes no sense about why it was placed where it was. With re doing the pre production, the weakness
would be the time it takes to do it. There was so much I needed to re consider, as I’m re considering a lot in
the film. Lastly, the shot list. The weakness yet again comes down to the time. I was pretty much doubling
what I've already got in this new list, so this lead me having to re add the seconds, and shuffle existing
scenes to work with the new scenes.
Next time
For next week, I want to use all of my planning to create this new film. I need to be more focused and look at
my shot list more this time to help me get the scene right. I need to improve on the film. This is basically
saying I need to make sure that the film has more than one take if it needs it, and I need to stick with
continuity more this time by wearing the same outfit and watch wear. Lastly, I need to improve on the poster
planning. I need to annotate what my intentions are for it, and what I’m trying to show to the audience with
it.

20. Week 6In this week, I re filmed my short film. I started off with shooting the home scenes. I had used my shot list
and the location diagrams to list out where everything should be and how the sequence should be like in the
film. The one thing that helped me with re shooting would be the shot list. this one helped me, as it was
directing in more detail how everything should being the scene, so it doesn't turn out wrong. When filming,
the first scene, I decided to pan the camera of the character leaving, so that the scenery made more sense
and looked more familiar to prepare for the up coming scenes. After I did the first scenes, I moved onto the
second. With the second scene, it shows the camera moving backwards whilst the character is moving. This
was added so that the character can look like he was walking home, whilst texting. The backwards moving
shots adds a medium shot for me to add the text notifications to it, as the character will be in the same spot
in the frame duration. The technique worked with the final cut, as it didn’t end up being too shaky, and did
manage to show that the character was walking to somewhere. I also did a dolly shot. With the dolly shot, I
made the camera go towards my face. As I couldn’t access a shoulder mount, I got my camera operator to
hold the camera steadily and walk towards me. The technique worked, as it had a steady and smooth move
in it which helped me with editing, as the dolly zoom presented a smooth finish which only moves towards
the character, unlike the last edit which moved up and down. I also did the window shot. As it was a bright
day, the sun shined a reflection I onto the window. This made it hard to show the character move by, as
there was a reflection in the window. I managed to get the shot, as I toned down the brightness of the
camera and made the camera closer to the window. The shot worked in the final take, as you can tell there is
someone moving from the inside. The reflection makes it more anonymous to who the person is, which
works, as it makes you want to know who this person is and what they are going to do. During the inside
scenes, I switched to the go pro or the walkthrough scenes. The cannon footage couldn’t shoot the whole of
the corridor, as the footage looked more closer up than I thought. I decided to use the go pro, which showed
more of the room and was easier to fit through the corridor. The walkthrough with the go pro shows the
camera moving towards the door. The shot builds up the tension, as it was slowly approaching the main
issue in the film. The camera also follows the characters movement. After four takes, I managed to show the
person walk past the character.

21. The final cut does break the tension to terror, as the person comes out of nowhere. The scene works, as it
stresses the audience, as they know that someone is in there, whilst the character doesn’t, teasing potential
danger. I lastly do the surprise scene. For this, I moved some furniture back to fit the camera, and placed
balloons everywhere to make it clear that it’s a birthday party. The scene gets a clear shot of the characters
reaction, and what he has done. After I do the scenes at home, I move onto the college scenes. With the
outside scenes, I managed to shoot the character walking in the building. It made it clear to where the
character was going. For the class room scene, I went with the original plan with making the character have
a friend say happy birthday, but I decided to change it, as I wanted the characters to have a conversation to
make the character share what he is doing. The new scene consisted of the characters facing each other
from two different seats. The camera shot showed a bit of the chair at the bottom of the shot, to show that
the character is talking to someone from far away. I want to re shoot it again though, as I need to make the
characters closer to the edge of the shot to make it even more clearer that they are talking to each other
from different sides as the existing shot made it look like they were facing different directions. I then put the
footage together on premier. Some of the shots were on an angle, for some reason, so I rotated it and
enlarged the image to make it fit the shot. I also added in my recordings and coloured in the footage. I
Darkened the white and blue in the RGB curves. The colour made it look more distressing and created a
negative vibe, as the light isn't coming through to add the positivity. I lastly experimented with Photoshop.
The images I took didn’t work with the poster as it was to bright and too much to cut out. The second idea
didn’t look like a typical poster as it was too bland and not exiting. I'm currently deciding on re designing the
poster to be simple but exiting, so it doesn’t go overboard with the detail. I also made a draft intro and my
credits. The credits will have the list pop up from a birthday card.

22. The credits worked, as it sticks to the theming of the film and also removes the negative vibe, as it shows
bright colours. for the draft, I decided to make the balloon fly up from the bottom of the page. The draft
worked well, as it had the eerie intention that I was looking for, as the balloon comes out from nowhere and
there is no colour on it to represent party or happy vibes. I also attempted to link text messages to the
phone conversation. The linking was a hard process, as the image came out all pixilated and zoomed in. I
scrapped the idea and went with pitting it on the corners of the frames. The shot was stayed in the position
during the text scenes, so it works out well with placing them in the corner, as it clearly shows it comes from
the phone, as the phone is always in the shot, and shows a full conversation without anything moving or
panning.

23. 3 elements
Production
Photoshop
Filming
Strengths
The strength that I had with the production would be creating a negative mood in the film. The change of
colour I created with the RGB curves successfully made the film look more dark and eerie, as its blocking out
the bright colours to add the positive vibe. It was still successful to say it was a bright day when recording.
With the Photoshop, the strength would be creating the credits. This was a creative decision I made, as it
adds to the theme of the film. It was also an easy process to make, as it only required to make text appear
and disappear. With the filming, the strength would be the organising I had with it. I believe the location list
and shot list helped me to direct where I want everything to go in every scene. The camera and characters
were placed in the right shots and the right areas that I've intended it to be.
Weaknesses
With the production, the weakness would be the errors I faced with placing items in premier pro. A lot of
the time, adding sound would mean me having to wait 20+ minutes to render it constantly. This wasted my
potential time of editing the film. With Photoshop, the weakness would be creating the poster. The poster
was unsettling to look at, as it didn’t represent anything, or have a style as it was an existing image with a
bland background that wasn’t blending in with the image. With the filming, my weakness would be faced
with the weather during the window scene. The sun was too bright, making it reflect on the window. This
made it really hard to get a shot of the character walking pass the window.
Improvement
The one thing I definitely need to improve would be the poster. I need to rethink a new design that will work
well with the film, and will have a settling look to it. I also need to improve on the title shot. I need to make
the logo fade in and disappear to introduce the film. I also need to continue on editing the film. That means
improving the sound on the film. I need to start by adding sound effects and the music in the film and adding
the effects and transitions to them. The last thing I need to improve on is the text icons. I need to create
them for the other scenes. That means making them on Photoshop and layering them in the film.

24. Week 7
In this week, I carried on with the production. I started with adding the second text sequence for the film. In
this, I created the text box in Photoshop and added the text in it. I then made the text into separate
layers so that I could make them appear separately. Yet again, I never linked it to the phone, as the
character doesn’t move from the centre so I can easily get away with leaving it on the side. I also added
the text sound effects to it after putting the text boxes in its space. The shot and sounds all worked well
together, as it has a right amount of seconds between them to appear, as they never came at once. This
made the texting sequence look natural. After the text sequence, I moved onto re shooting the
conversation scene. I Did two take of it on this day as I wasn’t happy with the first. My intention was to
use the rule of thirds to put the character on either side, eye to eye to look like that they were looking at
each other. The first take didn’t work, as the characters were on different angles, but were too far from
the rule of third, so it had wasted camera space and the footage was blurry as I didn’t focus it before
shooting. When re shooting, I managed to get a grid on the camera screen. This helped me with making
sire that the characters were between the lines. The final shot was the best one, as they were focused
and were in the rule of thirds which made it look like the characters are looking at each other. After I
filmed the retake shot, I moved onto creating music in garage band. In garage band, I decided to go for
one tune which was light. This makes the film seem more tense, as the lack of instrumental makes it
quiet, leaving the loudly noises to come unexpectedly. For the musical part for the house scene, I put in
a high note violin sound for when the door is reviled. This sound is a one note which is to make the door
look more freaky, as the high note is singular with no unexpected change to make the audience prepare
for a jump. When the character passes, there is a sharp ding. This ding is to make the audience jump.
The music works well with the film, as it adds to the tension to making you expect something at any
moment. I also continued with the poster. I scraped the plan with the card, as it wasn’t working for me
and changed it to a minimalist poster. I would prefer to do minimalist seen as I was good at it during my
print project. I Have made the window the main subject with a shadow in it.

25. . I placed bricks on the outside by tracing the bricks from the house and adding them to the poster. The
shadow is to make the audience think who is this and why is this shadow there, making them want there
answers to be said. The new poster works well together, as it looks effective and it was more easier to
create, as it didn’t consist of putting separate images together, which didn’t look right the last time. I later
created sound for the dolly zoom. For the sound, I made it on garage band, by playing different tones of
violins and building the tone up. As I couldn’t figure out how to have a smooth note going to low to high, I
made this unsettling tone to discomfort the audience. The sound eventually worked out with the video, as it
firstly went well with the background music, and it gave the movement of the camera a good rhythm to
show the dolly zoom. I also sorted out some of the sound effects for the tension scenes. I added the
footsteps to the video, to get some diegetic sounds in the film to bring more of a real environment to the
film. I also added the hit and hit reaction sound effect to the silence scene. This reviled to why there is
someone on the floor, as it is giving assumption that the character hit the person. The effect works well with
the film, as its telling something in the film without any footage. Without the sound, it would just be a story
less black screen for 7 seconds leaving the final scene to not make sense.

26. 3 elements
Production
Photoshop
Music
Strengths
With production, the strength would be adding the sound effects to the film. I managed to blend them into
the film to create the tense and real feel to it. One example would be the pitch black scene. I added the
reaction and the sound effect. This made it obvious later on that the person had been hit after the edit. With
Photoshop, the strength would be the new poster design. The new poster is currently more fitting with the
film, as it all blends in together, and it makes you wonder what is happening in it. With the music, the
strength would be the outcome I got from it. The music managed to have an eerie feel, as it has a slow beat
and few notes to build up the tension and create the quiet environment to make the tension happen more
shockingly and un-expecting.
Weakness
With production, the weakness comes down to adding the new scenes. As everything is organised out,
adding the new scenes meant me having to re arrange sound/clip orders and move them. This made it hard
to place the new scenes to replace the old. With Photoshop, my weakness would be placing the logo on the
poster.

27. The logo was too unfitting for the rest of the poster as it was 3D and more shiny compared to the other
layers in the poster. This stopped the poster from looking effective. With music, my weakness would be
creating a gain sound effect. I was looking at tutorials to create one, but non of them managed to work with
my music. I couldn’t fade it to make a tune higher slowly. Another weakness from music would be finding
the instruments to make the music. This was time consuming, as I spent a lot of time trying to find dark and
sinister sounding tunes to make the music.
Next time
For next time, I need to continue on improving my poster. I need to improve on the look by making the logo
less 3D and the actual image more 3D. To do this I may add a texture to the bricks to give it that lumpy effect
that they have. I also need to improve on the film by adding more sound effects to reduce the amount of
silence whilst creating a more tense feel to it. I also need to improve on the graphics and intro. This means
adding the introduction to the film. Also I need to include the texting graphics to the third texting sequence.
This means me needing to go and Photoshop and writing messages on text bubble icons.

28. Week 8
In this week, I continues with editing the film and I changed the poster slightly too. I started off with the
posters. I added texture to the bricks and the window in the poster. This effect was suppose to add character
to the poster. it also makes it look more creative for a movie poster rather than having flat styles which
would be more fitting for a secondary poster rather than an advertisement one. I also flatted the logo on
the poster to blend in with the slight minimalist style. Before, it was too shiny and showed off more than I
imagined. By making it flat, it is easier to place in front of the bricks and it makes it blend well with the rest
of the image. I also added a dark shadow from the top of the poster. This added a dark and freakish tone to
the poster. It was added to create a more deeper mood to the poster, to make it more eerie as the dark
shadow represents the potential disaster the situation is. The changes I made to the posters ended up
working well together. The texture made the poster have a more realistic look to it and made it look
professional. The flat logo now has a better look to it which now fits in with the sharp bricks. After the
poster, I moved onto the third texting sequence in the film. With this, I went to Photoshop to create the
speech shapes and the text involved in it. After creating the text, I moved the layers to premier pro to place
in order to the shot. The text icons were placed close to the character to draw the audience to one place in
the shot. I then added the notification and message received sounds to the video to make the audience
aware that new information has just appeared to the screen. To make the icons blend in with the bland look,
I added the rgb curves to the icons so that they don’t look too bright with the rest of the footage.

29. The thing which worked well with the icons would be the transition and the way it blends together. The
transition of the sound with the text appearance had a tension feel to the situation, as you are waiting for
the next response. For the blending, you can easily tell which icon represents who. The way you can tell is
from the sentence it says. The one in panic and looking for answers is clearly going to be the character.
Lastly, I did more work on the intro. I made the logo explode at the end to end the intro, and to represent a
balloon burst you see at a party. This required me enlarging the logo, and cutting it to make it look popped.
This worked well with the intro, as it makes an intriguing disappear which makes the audience fascinated in
what just happened to the logo. The original balloon would wiggle up to form an “I”, but it looked like a tag
pole. I changed it into an orange balloon going up with the singular balloon shaking. This way, it looks more
naturalistic and the colour orange is a mix of blood and happiness (red + yellow). The colour doesn’t revile
the official theme to the film, keeping it mysterious. The logo is a bit stiff, but the idea works well with the
theme of the film. It creates a tense feeling, as nothing is in the background, and we are forced to watch this
balloon fly up till it eventually arrives at the logo.

30. 3 elements:
Poster
Editing
Intro
Strengths:
For the poster, the strength would be involved with the texture pack in the brick. The effect that I intended
on having worked well with the whole poster, as it stops it from looking ordinary and shows creativity in the
image. There wasn’t as much creativity before, as the image was just too flat and just looked like cut out
squares. For the intro, the strength would be creating the explosion. The explosion was wasn’t an easy
process, as it required me to cut the word into so any different pieces, but the outcome was worth the work,
as it looks like something exploding into pieces without any pauses or anything looking slow. Lastly, the
editing. The thing which I was good at in terms of editing would be creating the conversation. I believe that
the conversation which I made for the text sequence worked well, as it firstly explains why the character
does his actions, and secondly, it keeps the audience intrigued to what the next respond will be and why the
person is saying such a thing.
Weakness:
The weakness for the poster would be adding extra word detail. I wanted to put the production company for
the film on the poster, but wherever I put it wouldn’t stand out, or wouldn't’t properly fit in with the rest of
the poster, as the font was too thin to stand out from the rest of the texture of the poster. This is an issue, as
it stops the poster from looking neat. For the editing, the weakness is involved with linking the text sound
with the action of the character. The character doesn’t take breaks when texting, so when he has sent a text,
he doesn’t stop. This doesn’t look realistic with the film, as the typing is too long for the short worded text
being sent. For the intro, the weakness would be the look of it. The intro lags when it moves, and doesn't
move smoothly. This makes it unsettling to watch (not in a intension way) and makes it look less
professional.

31. Improvements:
There are a couple of items which I need to improve on for next week. The one thing would be
the production company name in the film. I need to think of ideas in which I can present the
company name of the film in the poster, so that the poster shows who the creator/team is that
made this film. I also need to improve on the intro. I need to add the sound to the intro, so that
it is more interesting, and so I can easily transition it to the film better. Lastly, I need re watch
the film over and over, so that I can spot mistakes in the film that I can fix or edit. I may lower
volumes from sounds so it isn't too loud with the scene; it may also include me fixing the colour
scheme, so there isn't one shot that looks different to the rest of the scene that I change.

32. Week 9
In this week, I had completely finished off my production work. I had started off the week with completing
my poster. I had decided to not go ahead with putting the production company name on the poster, seen as
it had ruined the posters look. The production co. Sign wouldn’t blend in with the brick background, making
the poster look un easing to look at. Placing a block to show the name wouldn’t match the theming of the
poster. I did decide to fade out the shadow from the window, so that someone from far away would want to
look closer to see what is through the window. Someone from far will only glimpse at the poster, and will see
a mysterious dark shadow. They will go closer to see what it actually is. This will draw people into seeing the
poster. The intention works, as the shadow looks less visible from far away. After finishing the poster, I finally
exported the video. Before doing so, I needed to sort out a few shots from the film. Some of the colours in
the tension scenes weren't matching with the shots after, which looks bad for continuity and also breaks the
tension. To fix the situation, I copied and pasted the colour scheme for the house scene to make them all
match. For the outside shot, I adjusted the highlights, so it wasn’t as visible, and added more blue to match
the main colour scheme. I also added brightness for that, so that it can match the next shot, seen as the next
shot has different lighting due to different weather. I also added a gasp noise at the end of the surprise
scene, so that the party guest seem more shocked after what they’ve seen.

33. . The brightness option aloud me to balance the colour scheme. This helped me match the colour scheme
brightness with the next frames to make the two frames have the same colour and lighting. The brightness
effect on the scenes worked out, as it matched the next scenes colour schemes. This kept the scenes mood
tense, as nothing (colour wise) is changing to distract the audience. After the colour correction, I sorted out
the intro. With it, I added music and sound to it. For the music, I had played music I created from garage
band. The music was a low horizon sound which gives a tense environment to the film. This makes the film
unsettling to watch at the beginning as it introduces a negative vibe . This is to make the audience feel a bit
tense, as they don’t know when the negative scenes will happen. The pop sound, which I made, was added
to scare the audience. This is to present a film with unexpected sequences in it. I then later added the intro
and credits to the film and exported it to You Tube. After that, I had a little bit of time left to begin my
evaluation. I talk about my research and talk about the strengths. I reference the target audience, seen as it
helped me conclude who they were for my film.

34. 3 elements:
Poster
Intro
Film
Strengths:
With the poster, the strength is involved with the shadow. Fading it out made it more of an illusion to look at
from further. This makes the poster seem more intriguing from far away, as people will go closer to it to see
what is in the window. They will see it’s a person, and the people will want to know why they are there. For
the intro, the strength would be the sound that is included in the intro sequence. The sound makes it more
tense to watch, as it has no high notes to bring a positive attitude. It also has a pop, which shocks the
audience. This is a good introduction to a tense film. Lastly, the film. For the film, the strength would be the
colour scheme. The new colour scheme adds to the nice flow of tension, as it doesn’t break into a complete
different colour scheme in the next scheme (which ruins the atmosphere of the film).the smooth flow keeps
the tension, as there is no bright or change of colour to ruin the tense environment.
Weakness:
For the poster, the weakness would be involved with placing the production company name. it wasn’t
blending in with the poster background, which made it look oddly placed and not very visible. It would have
been nice to include the production co. name, as it adds that extra bit of information about the film. For the
intro, the weakness would be the way it looks. Its very slow and steady when moving. This doesn't look very
professional and quite uncomforting (in a bad way), as you'd expect the balloon to move up faster. Lastly the
film. The weakness was actually involved with sorting out the colour and lighting. The house shot (where the
character is breathing) wouldn’t match with the rest of the shots in the scene. This led me having to alter
the shot separately to match the rest of the shots in the scene. This was time consuming.

35. Improvements:
I cant really improve anything in my film since its all exported and finished. If I could, id improve the intro. I
would have added more shots in the Photoshop to make the balloon move upward more quicker. This will
give a better presentation to introduce the film. Also, I would have tried to have come up of better ways to
put the production company in the poster. The information would have told us more on who created the
film, which would have added more of a spotlight to the producer. For next time, I need to continue with my
evaluation. I've started on my research, I need to look into my previous slides to see what has gone well and
what I could have done better for next time.

36. Week 10
In this week, I spent the whole week on the evaluation. I continued on the research. I talked about the
strengths and weaknesses for the research. I mention how the film and secondary research helped me. I
explained that the films helped me get inspired in what want to include, and the secondary research helped
me understand why those films are so popular and who they target to. I added screenshots of the work,
which shows a demonstration of what I'm talking about. I also talk about what didn’t help me . I mention the
interviews and specific research areas in the films and poster. I did the same strength and weakness for the
planning too. The strengths being the floor plan, the shot list and the style sheet. The weakness would be
making the story board, the poster plans and the sound plan. This evaluating helped me reflect on what I
need to focus on more, and what I need to spend less time on. This will help me with decisions on my up
coming projects. The time management slide was different compared to the research and planning. In this, I
talk about what used up my time and how I dealt with my time. This helped me realise what caused me to
be behind in work, which warned me what not to do for next time, so work is done in the time that is
intended. I then moved onto the aesthetic qualities. With this, I pointed out which areas of chosen scenes
look good and the strengths and weaknesses for those. This basically shows to me what areas of my work
looks good enough to communicate meaning to the audience. I separated it into two groups; colour and the
shots. The shots show to me if the camera techniques (the dolly zoom or the rule of thirds) were actually
effective to the plot. This helps me to see what I'm good at in terms of camera work, and what I can improve
on for next time. I also did aesthetic comparison, in which I pick out an existing film and compare the way it
looks. This helps me see if my film looks like a professional product, and see what I've done for my own take
for the film , to show how I've also gone down my own path.

37. Week 10
I did the same for the technical qualities. I compared three films with mine to see the difference in the way it
was made. This helped me with seeing how other films have structured the film together, to see if I've
picked up anything in terms of techniques from the other films, to see if I've pulled it off well. The
comparisons did show me how my film has used some techniques to make my film, and shown me how I’ve
gone my own direction to make it different to the existing product. I also did an audience appeal. For this, I
explain what I did to reach to the core audience of my film. I got the demographics from three questions
from the survey and showed how I reached to the answers of the survey and applied it to my film. I did the
same, but for the concluded target audience. I picked out what I stated it was, and shown how that audience
would like my film. This shows to me if I've been successful in reaching the target audience, and see if parts
of my film had aimed at what I've said. The audience appeal helped me, as it shows confirmation that I've
aimed to the target audience. Lastly, the peer evaluation. With this, I got three different people to share
what they think worked with the film and what could be done better. It helped me see with what intensions
ended up working out, and showed to me what didn’t. The stuff that didn’t work allowed me to consider
what I could have done to improve the issue to make that work.

38. Three elements:
Planning/ research/time evaluation
Aesthetic/technical qualities
Peer evaluation
Strengths:
One of my strength goes for evaluating the time. This really helped me with cracking down what caused me
to be delayed in some areas of the project which gives me the opportunity to see what I can do next time to
keep ahead of time and being behind on work. Another strength goes for the aesthetic qualities listing. It
helped me understand if my effects in the film did manage to match my intention, and showed me what I
should have done to make it better next time. Lastly, the peer evaluation. The thing which it helped me with
the slide would be seeing what I could do next time. This gave me an opportunity to see what I can do to
impress the audience better after seeing their response.
Weakness:
One weakness would be evaluating the research. I was struggling to pick out specific areas that didn’t really
benefit me in the research because it did all in a way sort of helped me with structuring my project. Another
weakness would be the technical qualities. I struggled to get my head around what I'm comparing, as I didn't
completely understand the definition of the technical side of the work. Lastly, the peer evaluation. I don’t
believe that the disagreement paragraph benefited me with evaluating my project, as I'm completely slating
and denying my faults from the feedback that the people have given me.