Elishia Selby received marks of 16/20 for planning, 48/60 for the main construction task, and 18/20 for evaluation. Overall she received 82/100 and a grade of A for her AS coursework. The evaluator provided positive feedback on Elishia's use of video, prezi, powerpoint, word documents, powtoon, and emaze to demonstrate her understanding of audience, genre, and the use of production technologies. Minor improvements were noted around spelling, punctuation and capitalization.

1. AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: SELBY Elishia
Planning – Comments and mark out of 16/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 48/60
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 18/20
Question 1:
Video – excellent detail on how conventions used in production, with good
understanding shown of how mise-en-scene used. Evidence of real products to
highlight argument used to good effect. Great video.
Question 2:
Prezi – good understanding shown of how characters are represented and affect
on audience through use of mise-en-scene. Use of theorists would have enhanced
answer. At times too reliant on stereotype.
Question 3:
PowerPoint /SlideShare –excellent detail and research on distributor and why they
were chosen. There is statistical data and where information was found.
Question 4 and 5:
Word/Calemeo – excellent detail on typical audience with some great use of
primary/secondary research used as evidence. Feedback included from audience
with some reflective comments.
Question 6:
PowToon – very good detail on technologies used in all parts of production. Post
shows good understanding of what was learnt and how effective each tool was in
production.
Question 7:
Emaze – very good detail on progress from prelim task with very good
understanding of demonstrated. Addition of screen grabs from both products used
effectively.
Excellent detail on questions showing very good understanding of task, audience
and genre.
Some very good analytical detail, great use of images with great use of research in
answering questions.
Read your work, as there are lapses in spelling, punctuation and capital letters!
Good use of technologies.
Total 82/100 Grade: A