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AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: NEWBURY Connor
Planning – Comments and mark out of 13/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 37/60
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 10/20
Question 1:
Emaze – some nice detail on how conventions used in production with some clear
understanding shown of how mise-en-scene used. Lacks evidence of real products
to highlight argument.
Question 2:
PowToon (link) – some understanding shown of how characters are represented and
affect on audience through use of mise-en-scene. Use of theorists would have
enhanced answer. Too reliant on stereotype and not enough on actual research,
Question 3:
Word /SlideShare –basic detail on distributor on why they were chosen. There is
statistical data and where information was found. Lacks images.
Question 4 and 5:
Prezi – very basic detail on audience with no research used as evidence. Feedback
included from audience but no reflective comments. Lots of empty slides??
Question 6:
Blog post – some detail on technologies used in parts of production. Post shows
basic understanding of what was learnt, post is little more than a descriptive list. Not
all technologies discussed – camera???
Question 7:
PowerPoint/SlideShare – basic detail on progress from prelim task with some
understanding of progress. Addition of screen grabs from both products would have
shown clearer understanding.
Basic detail on questions showing some understanding of task, audience and genre.
Some analytical detail, some good use of images with little use of research in
answering questions.
Read your work, as there are lapses in spelling, punctuation and capital letters!
Some if basic use of technologies.
Total 60/100 Grade: C

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  • 1. AS Coursework Overall Marks Name: NEWBURY Connor Planning – Comments and mark out of 13/20 For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 37/60 For full comments please see the production marks sheet Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 10/20 Question 1: Emaze – some nice detail on how conventions used in production with some clear understanding shown of how mise-en-scene used. Lacks evidence of real products to highlight argument. Question 2: PowToon (link) – some understanding shown of how characters are represented and affect on audience through use of mise-en-scene. Use of theorists would have enhanced answer. Too reliant on stereotype and not enough on actual research, Question 3: Word /SlideShare –basic detail on distributor on why they were chosen. There is statistical data and where information was found. Lacks images. Question 4 and 5: Prezi – very basic detail on audience with no research used as evidence. Feedback included from audience but no reflective comments. Lots of empty slides?? Question 6: Blog post – some detail on technologies used in parts of production. Post shows basic understanding of what was learnt, post is little more than a descriptive list. Not all technologies discussed – camera??? Question 7: PowerPoint/SlideShare – basic detail on progress from prelim task with some understanding of progress. Addition of screen grabs from both products would have shown clearer understanding. Basic detail on questions showing some understanding of task, audience and genre. Some analytical detail, some good use of images with little use of research in answering questions. Read your work, as there are lapses in spelling, punctuation and capital letters! Some if basic use of technologies. Total 60/100 Grade: C