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1. AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: GREVATT Daniel
Planning – Comments and mark out of 16/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 46/60
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 16/20
Question 1:
PowerPoint/SlideShare – Great detail on how conventions used in production with
great understanding shown of how mise-en-scene used. Good evidence of real
products used to highlight argument.
Question 2:
Prezi – good understanding of how characters represented and affect on audience
through use of mise-en-scene. Use of theorists would have enhanced answer.
Question 3:
PowerPoint/SlideShare – Good detail on why distributor chosen with examples used
as evidence. Shows good understanding of audience and distributor profile.
Question 4 and 5:
PowToon – good detail on potential audience and how they were attracted, lacks
good use of research into viewing figures and at times relies too heavily on
stereotypes. Good reflection on feedback from audience added.
Question 6:
Word/Calemeo – Some detail on technologies used in filming and editing. At times
detail is too descriptive. Many technologies that were used not covered but post
does show clear understanding of what was learnt.
Question 7:
Video – good clear detail on progress from prelim task with good addition of screen
grabs from both products.
Good detail on questions showing very good understanding of task, audience and
genre.
Good analytical detail, good use of images but lacks good use of research in
answering questions.
Read your work, as there are lapses in spelling, punctuation and capital letters!
Good clear layout throughout.
Total 78/100 Grade: B