Tarran Roche received a grade of D for their AS coursework, scoring 54 out of 100 total points. Their planning was marked out of 13/20 but full comments are on a separate sheet. For the main construction task they scored 34 out of 60, with additional feedback on another sheet. Their evaluation scored 7 out of 20, with minimal detail and little analysis shown in answering the questions, and question 6 was not answered at all. Overall there was basic understanding demonstrated and limited use of images, research, or reflective comments in the evaluation.

1. AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: ROCHE Tarran
Planning – Comments and mark out of 13/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 34/60
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 7/20
Question 1:
Word/SlideShare – very basic detail. No real understanding of task shown. Title and
POV offered as examples.
Question 2:
PowerPoint/SlideShare – little understanding shown of how characters are
represented and affect on audience through use of mise-en-scene. Use of theorists
would have enhanced answer. Age of actors only link to audience noted.
Question 3:
PowerPoint/SlideShare –Basic detail given to choice of distributor. Plus question
does not ask who would produce.
Question 4 and 5:
PowToon - Little detail on audience with stereotypes used and no evidence of
research. Basic understanding shown of task and audience. No feedback included
from audience and no reflective comments.
Question 6: This is answering Q7. Q6 not answered.
Emaze – some detail on progress from prelim task with some understanding
demonstrated. Addition of screen grabs from both products would have enhanced
answer.
Question 7: Answering Q7 again
Word/SlideShare – different detail on progress from prelim task with some comment
on camera shots and angles. Addition of screen grabs from both products would
have enhanced answer.
Minimal detail on questions showing basic understanding of task, audience and
genre.
Very little analytical detail, little use of images or research in answering questions.
Question 6 not answered.
Read your work, as there are lapses in spelling, punctuation and capital letters!
Basic use of technologies.
Total 54/100 Grade: D