Ben Walker received a grade of B for his AS coursework, which included several components. For his planning, he received a mark of 14/20. His main construction task earned a mark of 50/60. His evaluation earned 15/20. In his evaluation, he provided good analysis for most questions but was asked to include more details and evidence in some responses. Overall, his work demonstrated a clear understanding of the tasks and good use of technologies, though he needs to proofread more carefully for spelling and punctuation.

1. AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: WALKER Ben
Planning – Comments and mark out of 14/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 50/60
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 15/20
Question 1:
Prezi – good detail on how conventions used in production, good understanding
shown of how mise-en-scene used to set up narrative, and conform/challenge
genre codes. There is clear evidence of linking product to real products to highlight
argument. Good use of images.
Question 2:
PowToon – good detail on how representation and mise-en-scene used to
represent characters, with good links to audience expectations and how they can
relate to characters.
Use of theorists would have enhanced answer.
Question 3:
Emaze – some detail on distributor that you could choose with limited detail on
choice.
Question 4 & 5:
Video – basic detail on typical audience for genre with some detail on who they are
but no evidence of real research. Needed better links to pre-prod research.
Some detail on how audience was attracted, with clear knowledge of what needed
to be put on place. Some audience feedback included showing if goals had been
met. Needed to give more detail on feedback…who were they?
Question 6:
PowerPoint/SlideShare– detailed post on technologies used with good reflective
detail and detail on what was learnt. Difficult to read as text is blurred.
Question 7:
PowerPoint/SlideShare – great detail on progress made with attention given to all
aspects of production. Clear understanding of progress made.
Good detail on questions showing understanding of task, audience and genre.
Good use of analytical detail, images and research in answering questions.
Read your work, as there are lapses in spelling, punctuation and capital letters!
Good use of technologies.
Total 79/100 Grade: B