1. A2 Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: Charlotte Froud
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – music video analysis yes
2. Genre Analysis (including genre & digipak research) yes
3. Target Audience yes
4. Annotated lyrics yes
5. Drafts yes
6. Storyboards yes
7. Shotlist yes
8. Layouts – floor plan yes
9. Locations yes
10.Costumes yes
11.Props yes
12.Actors yes
13.Equipment yes
14.Production schedule yes
Teachers comments
1. Your analysis of Katy Perry’s Roar could be more detailed.
2. There is good evidence of digipak research, you have noted some good
observations from your research of pop covers. Where is your genre
research? Genre research now added and now presented as a prezi.
3. Your target audience work needs to be spell checked and also state
clearly which genre you are doing and how the target audience might be
attracted to that genre. Now added.
4. Good clear ideas on your annotated lyrics
5. Some evidence of drafts
6. Good detailed storyboards, although can we scan these in so we can
zoom in and read them. Can’t do this at the moment. Now done
7. This needs to be much more detailed. Rather than a list please sue the
table format sent out. Much better well done
8. Again these need scanning in so we can read them properly, but look
good so far. done
9. Photos have been taken; please upload the original images so we can
see them clearly. With each image needs a brief description of where this
will be used in your video. done
10.Choice of costume added with reasons. More detail added to costumes
including some colour connotations.
11.Props now added. Be careful of your wording surrounding the vodka and
pills. You are not using real items here for health and safety reasons.
12.Choice of actors now added with reasons.
13.Equipment now added.
14.Costumes, props, actors, equipment can all be covered in your
production schedule. This needs to be much more detailed. Please see
the example schedule as a guide of how much more information is

2. needed. Week by week now added to the production schedule. For more
detail in your filming stages you could break this down day by day.
Although some of your work is very detailed, this is Level 1 at the moment as
some work is incomplete and there is no evidence of organisation of actors,
props, costumes and equipment.
All work has now been completed with some great additional work (risk
assessments and permission slips). Goodwin has been applied to your video
well, although this could be slightly more detailed. This is a excellent body of
pre-production work, well done. Level 4.
Mark out of 20: 7
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 02/01/14
Student action plan for improvement
I have added some images and artist examples into my genre research and re-
worked this so it is now a prezi. More added about colour on the costume
section. Health and safety reasoning added to the props. Added a new post on
how I am using some of Goodwins aspects in my video. Added a second music
video analysis.
Final mark out of 20: 16 Date:21/01/14