Overall Feedback

1. AS Coursework Overall Marks
Name: JAMES Alex
Planning – Comments and mark out of 17/20
For full comments please see the pre-production marks sheet
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 48/60
For full comments please see the production marks sheet
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 16/20
Question 1:
(Animation) Great use of technology to create stop motion animation. Good
understanding shown of typical conventions and how they were used and
challenged. Good use of shots as evidence.
Question 2:
(Prezi) Good understanding shown of how social groups represented using mise-en-
scene, actors and conventions.
Question 3:
(Canva) Some nice detail on choice, with good research into distributor. Clear use of
secondary research but sites not included. Needed more on why they would
distribute your film, what other films/genres they have distributed.
Question 4&5:
(Video) Target audience identified with some detail on other interests, research has
clearly been used but needed evidence of actual research. Good use of clips as
evidence.
Good detail on how audience attracted using mise-en-scene and sound, with use of
feedback used to gauge success/failure, but evidence of actual feedback not
included.
Question 6:
(PowToon) Good breakdown of technologies used and learnt in production, with
some analysis added. Slides move to quick!
Question 7:
(Prezi) Some good reflective analysis of progress made in tasks. Needed images
from products as evidence.
Overall an excellent evaluation with good understanding shown of genre and
audience with good detail on technical elements. Good use of different technologies.
Total 81/100 Grade: A