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Production Process Evaluation
Research
• Strengths: I researched other magazines that were similar to mine and
spoke how about how I would take ideas from these magazines and make
my product similar to theses magazines.
• I explained why I researched these things and what I was going to do with
my ideas and how.
• Weaknesses: I could of spent more time writing about the magazines. I
think I could of annotated the magazines better and chose some a bit
more closer to mine.
Planning
• Strengths: I got 3 ideas and picked between them to see which one I liked
best. I described each idea I had and said what I would do if I choses the
idea and which subject I picked (music, film and gaming).
• Once I chose my idea I think it explained well of what I was going to do for
my product.
• Weaknesses: I could of made my mood board better by adding more than
just the characters, I think I could of added different sets or the summary
of the show.
Time Management
• I think I did manage time well because I did every on the day that I put
down and completed them all. I completed all of them but 1 of them
needed a little bit of improvement.
• I think if I had more time for the final product, I think I could make it
better and add more detail to the product.
• I did everything on time and handed it in on the same day I was going to
do.
Technical Qualities
They both use red and white because they both
use the same colour scheme.
They also both use a similar font because they
small and stand out a lot.
They both have 2 actors from the cast in
because it says a lot about what the show is like.
They both have a different colours in
background.
They both have characters but 2 are female and
2 are male.
The font colours are different, the top magazine
is gold and red where as the bottom one is red
and white
Aesthetic Qualities
The product that I made is about a show called
Brooklyn 99 and I think the product looks good
because I think its creative and it stands out to other
magazine covers.
I could improve by taking more time on it, adding
more info about the magazine on the front cover and
maybe change the colours to match.
Audience Appeal
I think I got my target audience well because I
got the colours that my audience would like and
wrote about stuff my audience would agree with
what I said about the show and the characters.
In the 2 page spread I talk about all the
stuff in a way that my audience would
understand and like the way it flows.
Peer
Feedback
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– The colours worked well with the image
• What improvements could have been made to
the product? Get rid of the gold text and
change the colour.
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– The fonts worked well with the magazine
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Should of wrote more about the actors in real life.
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– Liked the way everything matched like the colours,
font and image.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product? Make the images less blurry so it
stands out more
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback? I agree that everything matched
and looked good.
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback? The fonts being good, I think I could
of picked some better fonts.
Peer Feedback Summary
• If I could make any changes to my work it
would be the fonts because I don’t think they
worked with the colour scheme I was going
for. The gold just didn’t work with the red and
white so I would make that changes I would
make.

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7. evaluation(3)

  • 3. Research • Strengths: I researched other magazines that were similar to mine and spoke how about how I would take ideas from these magazines and make my product similar to theses magazines. • I explained why I researched these things and what I was going to do with my ideas and how. • Weaknesses: I could of spent more time writing about the magazines. I think I could of annotated the magazines better and chose some a bit more closer to mine.
  • 4. Planning • Strengths: I got 3 ideas and picked between them to see which one I liked best. I described each idea I had and said what I would do if I choses the idea and which subject I picked (music, film and gaming). • Once I chose my idea I think it explained well of what I was going to do for my product. • Weaknesses: I could of made my mood board better by adding more than just the characters, I think I could of added different sets or the summary of the show.
  • 5. Time Management • I think I did manage time well because I did every on the day that I put down and completed them all. I completed all of them but 1 of them needed a little bit of improvement. • I think if I had more time for the final product, I think I could make it better and add more detail to the product. • I did everything on time and handed it in on the same day I was going to do.
  • 6. Technical Qualities They both use red and white because they both use the same colour scheme. They also both use a similar font because they small and stand out a lot. They both have 2 actors from the cast in because it says a lot about what the show is like. They both have a different colours in background. They both have characters but 2 are female and 2 are male. The font colours are different, the top magazine is gold and red where as the bottom one is red and white
  • 7. Aesthetic Qualities The product that I made is about a show called Brooklyn 99 and I think the product looks good because I think its creative and it stands out to other magazine covers. I could improve by taking more time on it, adding more info about the magazine on the front cover and maybe change the colours to match.
  • 8. Audience Appeal I think I got my target audience well because I got the colours that my audience would like and wrote about stuff my audience would agree with what I said about the show and the characters. In the 2 page spread I talk about all the stuff in a way that my audience would understand and like the way it flows.
  • 10. Feedback 1 • What did you like about the product? – The colours worked well with the image • What improvements could have been made to the product? Get rid of the gold text and change the colour.
  • 11. Feedback 2 • What did you like about the product? – The fonts worked well with the magazine • What improvements could have been made to the product? – Should of wrote more about the actors in real life.
  • 12. Feedback 3 • What did you like about the product? – Liked the way everything matched like the colours, font and image. • What improvements could have been made to the product? Make the images less blurry so it stands out more
  • 13. Peer Feedback Summary • What do you agree with from your peer feedback? I agree that everything matched and looked good. • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? The fonts being good, I think I could of picked some better fonts.
  • 14. Peer Feedback Summary • If I could make any changes to my work it would be the fonts because I don’t think they worked with the colour scheme I was going for. The gold just didn’t work with the red and white so I would make that changes I would make.

Editor's Notes

  1. What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  2. What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  3. Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  4. Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  5. Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  6. How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Refer to your findings from your questionnaire. Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  7. What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?