FMP Evaluation
Ryan Craft
Production Process Evaluation
Research
• The strengths of the research was mainly the colour scheme as it related
to the main image which was in the middle.
• It helped to give me an idea for what to do my magazine on but also
where I should place the text.
• The 2 page spread showed me what I could write my chosen TV show on
as I found out an idea of what I could talk about and what I could title the
article.
• The front covers gave me an idea for the colour scheme of red, yellow and
orange to show the speed of the flash.
Planning
• It helped me to come up with an idea for what type of style or what the
topic of my magazine will be.
• It helped me to get images of what I would like featured on my magazine
and the fonts of the text.
• The mood board helped me to choose the colour scheme of red and
yellow, but also helped me to get the right font for the title.
• It helped me to explore all different types of ideas for my magazine
including different genres.
Time Management
• Overall my timing was pretty good however when I made the experiment
it took longer than I wanted since I could not make it look like the other
magazine.
• The final project I feel was a little bit rushed as I was struggling to find out
what else I should add on my front cover.
• The 2 page spread took a bit longer as I had to review a whole TV show to
inform the audience.
• The research was a little rushed I think as I did not really think to much
about it, I think I could add more detail.
Technical Qualities
Similarities:
• They both use the same superhero in the
centre, The Flash, as he is a very
recognisable face.
• The colour scheme is really similar to give
the audience an idea about the show.
• The title of the magazine is at the top of
the magazine.
Differences:
• The barcodes are at the opposite sides of
the magazine.
• The fonts are different.
• Mine has a black text box unlike the other
as it doesn’t have a black text box.
Aesthetic Qualities
I think my front cover is quite creative because of its design and
the unique font for the magazine title. I feel like the information
that I put on the 2 page spread explains everything that I wanted
it to explain.
I would like to improve my experiment as I feel like it was rushed
as I did not know how to do certain parts to make it look similar
to the already created font cover.
Audience Appeal
The main character on the front cover and the picture of
Supergirl relates to the teenage audience as the TV shows as
well as the comic books where really famous making the face
of The Flash and Supergirl a recognisable face.
The image from the TV show prison Break shows the two
main characters who are quite famous actors relating to
teenagers from the age of 16 and above, making them very
recognisable.
Peer
Feedback
Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– The amount of detail in the 2 page spread really
sets the story of the TV show.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Make the front cover of the magazine look more
realistic.
Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– Putting images of the cast on the 2 page spread to
show the audience what they look like.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– You could of extended the bio for the main
characters.
Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– The font of the magazine title worked really well
with the rest of the magazine.
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Move the writing which says ‘The Flash’ as it is
covering some of the actors face.
Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
– That I added a lot of detail on the 2 page spread
and that I could extend the bio for the characters.
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
– I disagree that the magazine cover does not look
real.
Peer Feedback Summary
• I would add more information on the
characters in the TV show so that the
audience knows why they are trying to take
down the company or why they committed
the crimes that got them arrested.

7. evaluation(3)

  • 1.
  • 2.
  • 3.
    Research • The strengthsof the research was mainly the colour scheme as it related to the main image which was in the middle. • It helped to give me an idea for what to do my magazine on but also where I should place the text. • The 2 page spread showed me what I could write my chosen TV show on as I found out an idea of what I could talk about and what I could title the article. • The front covers gave me an idea for the colour scheme of red, yellow and orange to show the speed of the flash.
  • 4.
    Planning • It helpedme to come up with an idea for what type of style or what the topic of my magazine will be. • It helped me to get images of what I would like featured on my magazine and the fonts of the text. • The mood board helped me to choose the colour scheme of red and yellow, but also helped me to get the right font for the title. • It helped me to explore all different types of ideas for my magazine including different genres.
  • 5.
    Time Management • Overallmy timing was pretty good however when I made the experiment it took longer than I wanted since I could not make it look like the other magazine. • The final project I feel was a little bit rushed as I was struggling to find out what else I should add on my front cover. • The 2 page spread took a bit longer as I had to review a whole TV show to inform the audience. • The research was a little rushed I think as I did not really think to much about it, I think I could add more detail.
  • 6.
    Technical Qualities Similarities: • Theyboth use the same superhero in the centre, The Flash, as he is a very recognisable face. • The colour scheme is really similar to give the audience an idea about the show. • The title of the magazine is at the top of the magazine. Differences: • The barcodes are at the opposite sides of the magazine. • The fonts are different. • Mine has a black text box unlike the other as it doesn’t have a black text box.
  • 7.
    Aesthetic Qualities I thinkmy front cover is quite creative because of its design and the unique font for the magazine title. I feel like the information that I put on the 2 page spread explains everything that I wanted it to explain. I would like to improve my experiment as I feel like it was rushed as I did not know how to do certain parts to make it look similar to the already created font cover.
  • 8.
    Audience Appeal The maincharacter on the front cover and the picture of Supergirl relates to the teenage audience as the TV shows as well as the comic books where really famous making the face of The Flash and Supergirl a recognisable face. The image from the TV show prison Break shows the two main characters who are quite famous actors relating to teenagers from the age of 16 and above, making them very recognisable.
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  • 10.
    Feedback 1 • Whatdid you like about the product? – The amount of detail in the 2 page spread really sets the story of the TV show. • What improvements could have been made to the product? – Make the front cover of the magazine look more realistic.
  • 11.
    Feedback 2 • Whatdid you like about the product? – Putting images of the cast on the 2 page spread to show the audience what they look like. • What improvements could have been made to the product? – You could of extended the bio for the main characters.
  • 12.
    Feedback 3 • Whatdid you like about the product? – The font of the magazine title worked really well with the rest of the magazine. • What improvements could have been made to the product? – Move the writing which says ‘The Flash’ as it is covering some of the actors face.
  • 13.
    Peer Feedback Summary •What do you agree with from your peer feedback? – That I added a lot of detail on the 2 page spread and that I could extend the bio for the characters. • What do you disagree with from your peer feedback? – I disagree that the magazine cover does not look real.
  • 14.
    Peer Feedback Summary •I would add more information on the characters in the TV show so that the audience knows why they are trying to take down the company or why they committed the crimes that got them arrested.

Editor's Notes

  • #4 What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product? What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  • #5 What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product? What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
  • #6 Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time? What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
  • #7 Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page alongside an existing product Use text boxes and arrows
  • #8 Does your work look good? Was it creative? What aspects of your game’s visuals do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it? Discuss the strengths and weaknesses Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  • #9 How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience. Refer to your findings from your questionnaire. Put your final piece(s) in the centre of a page and analyse them Use text boxes and arrows
  • #15 What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?