I agree with parts of the feedback suggesting that the transitions could be shortened to allow more time for points. While I aimed for style with the transitions, shorter ones may improve the flow and ability to discuss topics in more depth. I disagree with the feedback about dialogue. In my research of similar review styles, I aimed to structure my dialogue and wording in a way that would appeal to my target audience. Overall the feedback was constructive and helped identify areas to potentially improve engagement while maintaining my goals for style and audience appeal. Peer review is very helpful for strengthening works and considering multiple perspectives.