The document provides feedback from someone similar in age to the creator on a mock music magazine they created. The feedback was positive, noting the magazine looked professionally done and had appealing design elements like the contents page. Some suggestions were provided, such as adding more photos to the double page spread interview to break up the text. Overall, the mock magazine was well received and the reviewer said they would purchase it.

1. How Did You
Attract/Address Your
Audience ?

2. The next few slides I have shown examples
of what my front cover, contents page and
double page spread look like and I have
annotated them showing different features
on the pages of why I put them there and
how they attract the audience.

3. Stars add to the The picture stands out
‘American’ theme straight away from the
rest
Clear font
which stands Shows the price
out to ALL in pounds,
audiences dollars and euros
The leather jacket Shows the date of
adds to the ‘rock’ that edition to
genre and adds show the reader
style how old it is
Other cover Gives a brief idea
lines which are of how
likely to attract established it is
the reader and if its been
going for long
Match with the
American theme
Giving provides
the audience to
go to it easily
rather than
searching the
‘PIA-ELIZA’ stands out magazine
more than any of the
other cover lines to Persuasive
show this is the main language to try
article in the magazine and attract the
reader
Barcode to make
Competitions attract it seem realistic
audience and grab their
attention as they may be
interested in the prize

4. Carries on the
American Pictures give
theme us a bit on
Typical thing an idea of
for a magazine what to
to do – have expect in the
the weekly articles
articles which
feature each
week The line shows a
clear marker of
All the latest where the two
news articles sections
are page separate from
number to each other
help the
reader
A plain subtle
navigate
background
through the
gives some
magazine
colour to the
An editors note page but not too
makes the much so the
magazine seem reader isn’t
more friendly and distracted or
gets to have their diverted from
say and is what’s on the
encouraging the rest of the page
reader to get
involved. The boxes round the
pieces of text help to
Competitions
separate the writing
attract the
and make it clear to
readers attention
read
to get involved
more

5. Bold colours & font to The red, white and blue
It also stand out and attract colours continue with the
introduces the the reader American theme
piece of text so
you know more
or less what
you’re going to
read
The The questions
introduction and the
makes it seem answers are in
more friendly a different
and a lot less style of text so
casual. they clearly
differentiate
This finishes off the
The pictures make it seem conversation so you know it’s
more appealing and not as coming to an end and gives the
boring reader an idea that there will be
more interviews to come

6. Feedback
The following questions are questions I asked someone of a similar age to me and this is the feedback
I got from them about what they think of my music magazine:
Q: Would you pick up this magazine If you saw it in a shop?
A: - Yes I think I would, it appeals to me very much
Q: Would you pay £2.20?
A: Yes definitely, it has a lot of pages so you get a lot for your money and most other music magazines
are a lot more expensive so yes definitely
Q: Do you think it looks professionally done?
A: Very! I don’t think I would have noticed it had been made by you if you didn’t tell me
Q: What do you think of the contents page?
A: It’s brilliantly done! There is lots going on, just as there usually would be on a contents page, makes
you feel like there is lots to read and it is a good layout and easy to read
Q: What do you think of the double page spread?
A: The interview is well written and the content of it is interesting but it looks a bit plain, you should put
more pictures on there and maybe not so much writing!
Q: What do you think of the photographs taken?
A: The photographs all look very professionally done and are all well thought out. From their actions,
to facial expressions, to clothes and the props they have.