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A2 Coursework – Media Texts
Name: Hillier, Jade
The work for the main task is complete.
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
• shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the
camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en
scene
• editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and
appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects
• recording and editing sound with images appropriately.
Music Video Comments:
Good idea,gooddancingsequences,butdance notalwayscaptured,neededmore camerashots
and edits.Butedited wellandsome nice use of transitionsandslo-mo.Neededbetterlinkswith
narrative andperformance.
Ancillary Task 1: Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out
of 9/10
Excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills. Great design fitting genre and
band. Clear understanding of conventions. Clear technical skill.
Ancillary Task 2: Construction – Ancillary Task 2 (Poster) comments and mark out
of 5/10
Basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills. Work seems an
afterthought.
Video:
29/40
Level 3
Ancillary Task 1:
9/10
Level /
Ancillary Task 2:
5/10
Level /
Total 43/60 Level: /

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  • 1. A2 Coursework – Media Texts Name: Hillier, Jade The work for the main task is complete. There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills. • shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en scene • editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects • recording and editing sound with images appropriately. Music Video Comments: Good idea,gooddancingsequences,butdance notalwayscaptured,neededmore camerashots and edits.Butedited wellandsome nice use of transitionsandslo-mo.Neededbetterlinkswith narrative andperformance. Ancillary Task 1: Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out of 9/10 Excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills. Great design fitting genre and band. Clear understanding of conventions. Clear technical skill. Ancillary Task 2: Construction – Ancillary Task 2 (Poster) comments and mark out of 5/10 Basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills. Work seems an afterthought. Video: 29/40 Level 3 Ancillary Task 1: 9/10 Level / Ancillary Task 2: 5/10 Level / Total 43/60 Level: /