production feedback

1. A2 Coursework – Media Texts
Name: Curtis, Craig
Music Video Comments:
The work for the main task is complete.
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
• shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the
camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en
scene
• editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and
appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects
• recording and editing sound with images appropriately.
Good lip-syncing. Nice narrative. Some shots out of focus. Could be more upbeat
to match the tempo of the song. Good use of locations.
Ancillary Task 1: Digipak
The candidate has demonstrated proficiency in the creative use of most of the
technical skills. The design fits with the genre and follows some conventions of
layout and page design. Excellent use of the image that goes across the front and
back cover. This image has been framed well and edited excellently in photoshop.
However the layout of the backcover could follow industry more through better
positioning of the barcode, and inclusion of legal information and spine title.
Ancillary Task 2: Poster
The candidate has demonstrated basic ability in the creative use of most of the
technical skills. The main image is well framed and shot and has been edited well
in photoshop. However more conventions were needed such as the inclusion of
social media icons or telling the audience where they could purchase this album.
Video:
26/40
Ancillary Task 1:
7/10
Ancillary Task 2:
6/10