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A2 Coursework – Media Texts
Name: Penfold, Eleanor
The work for the main task is complete.
There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills.
• shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the
camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en
scene
• editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and
appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects
• recording and editing sound with images appropriately.
Music Video Comments:
Good use of actor, good attemptat lipsync,greatvarietyof shots,confidantedit,strongopening.
Becomesa bitrepetitivetowardsend.MEScouldhave beenrepresentedbetterwithcostume
change.
Ancillary Task 1: Digipac
Proficientabilityinthe creative use of mostof the technical skills.
Good designfittinggenreandartist.Clearunderstandingof conventions.Goodtechnical skill.
Ancillary Task 2: Poster
Proficientabilityinthe creative use of mostof the technical skills.
Good designfittinggenreandartist.Goodunderstandingof conventions.Some goodtechnical skill.
Video:
32/40
Level 3
Ancillary Task 1:
7/10
Level
Ancillary Task 2:
7/10
Level
Total 46 /60 Level:

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Penfold, eleanor cw feedback

  • 1. A2 Coursework – Media Texts Name: Penfold, Eleanor The work for the main task is complete. There is evidence of excellence in the creative use of most of the technical skills. • shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en scene • editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects • recording and editing sound with images appropriately. Music Video Comments: Good use of actor, good attemptat lipsync,greatvarietyof shots,confidantedit,strongopening. Becomesa bitrepetitivetowardsend.MEScouldhave beenrepresentedbetterwithcostume change. Ancillary Task 1: Digipac Proficientabilityinthe creative use of mostof the technical skills. Good designfittinggenreandartist.Clearunderstandingof conventions.Goodtechnical skill. Ancillary Task 2: Poster Proficientabilityinthe creative use of mostof the technical skills. Good designfittinggenreandartist.Goodunderstandingof conventions.Some goodtechnical skill. Video: 32/40 Level 3 Ancillary Task 1: 7/10 Level Ancillary Task 2: 7/10 Level Total 46 /60 Level: