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A2 Coursework – Media Texts
Name: Newbury, Connor
The work for the main task is complete.
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
• shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the
camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en
scene
• editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and
appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects
• recording and editing sound with images appropriately.
Music Video Comments:
Good compositionof shots,goodstorytelling,edittobeat.Neededmore locationsthanbedroom,
perhapscostume changes.Butgooddirectionof actors.
Ancillary Task 1: (Digipak) comments and mark out of 5/10
Basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills.
Good design fitting genre and artist. Clear understanding of conventions. Some
technical skill.
Ancillary Task 2: (Poster) comments and mark out of 5/10
Basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills.
OK design fitting genre and artist. Good understanding of conventions. Some good
technical skill.
Video:
29/40
Level 3
Ancillary Task 1:
5/10
Level
Ancillary Task 2:
5/10
Level
Total 49/60 Level:

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Newbury Connor CW Feedback

  • 1. A2 Coursework – Media Texts Name: Newbury, Connor The work for the main task is complete. There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills. • shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes and close attention to mise en scene • editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions, captions and other effects • recording and editing sound with images appropriately. Music Video Comments: Good compositionof shots,goodstorytelling,edittobeat.Neededmore locationsthanbedroom, perhapscostume changes.Butgooddirectionof actors. Ancillary Task 1: (Digipak) comments and mark out of 5/10 Basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills. Good design fitting genre and artist. Clear understanding of conventions. Some technical skill. Ancillary Task 2: (Poster) comments and mark out of 5/10 Basic ability in the creative use of some of the technical skills. OK design fitting genre and artist. Good understanding of conventions. Some good technical skill. Video: 29/40 Level 3 Ancillary Task 1: 5/10 Level Ancillary Task 2: 5/10 Level Total 49/60 Level: