Feedback from pitch

1. Feedback from pitch

2. Feedback from pitch
Most of the feedback we received was positive. This is because the
audience said that we had carefully thought about the enigma. This is
because we had made the main character mysterious as well as not
revealing important things about them. As well as this, the audience
said that our idea will appeal to the target audience. In addition, we
know the camera shots that we are going to use in order to make it
into a real thriller as well as add mystery and tension.
However there are some things that we need to work on. For
example, we have to cut back on our idea. This is because, we had too
much going on as well as some things that were not feasible such as a
girl dying in a bathroom. We also have to find out who our actors are
going to be and see what soundtrack we are going to use. Finally, we
have to plan our mise-en-scene that we are going to have.