Pre-Production Feedback

1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: COLLINS Chloe
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Yes
2. Genre Analysis Yes
3. Target Audience Yes
4. Script Yes
5. Drafts Yes
6. Storyboard Yes
7. Shotlist Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan Yes
9. Locations Yes
10.Costumes Yes
11.Props Yes
12.Actors Yes
13.Equipment Yes
14.Production schedule yes
Teachers comments
1. 3 good analyses of film openings Shaun of the Dead, What we do in the
Shadows and Hot Fuzz. Good use of technical language throughout.
2. Comprehensive history of your genres presented well using powerpoint.
3. Good research on target audience. Good use of NRS scale and avatar
creator to show stereotypical audience member.
4. Good basic script. However, some of the formatting has been lost in the
way you have uploaded it. You could try uploading via slideshare so it
maintains the correct formatting. You also need to take out the camera
shots and synopsis at the start. Script has not been uploaded in
slideshare in the correct format, however camera shots and synopsis still
remain.
5. Clear evidence of drafting of ideas throughout.
6. An excellent set of storyboards showing your opening well.
7. A fantastic shot list, well done. Clear, precise and shows your vision.
8. Excellent clear floor plans of main locations
9. Location choices explained excellently with good clear photographs
10.Costume choices explained well, you could add images. Some images
now added.
11.Prop choices explained well, you could add images. Some images now
added.
12.Actor choices explained well, you could add images to show their
suitability
13.Equipment is detailed well in with costumes and props. You have 2 posts
detailing costumes, props, actors and equipment. Ideally make these
sections clearer, one post for each with explanations and images.
Equipment now detailed as part of costumes, props, actor powerpoint.
This is now much clearer, images used to show equipment.

2. 14.A basic list of dates have been handed in with the costumes, props and
actor choices. Please use a table format to show the details required.
Production schedule now updated to fully show all 3 stages of
production.
Overall this is a very proficient body of work, well done Chloe. Please see notes
above for improvements 4, 10, 11, 12 and 14.
Good use of technology throughout. Your blog needs organising. You appear to
have labelled your work but haven’t added the labels gadget, please add this.
You only need 4 labels:
Theory
Preliminary Tasks
Pre-production
Evaluation.
Preliminary tasks have all been blogged except your actual film, please add this.
Preliminary film now blooged.
Labels now organised on blog to navigate easier.
Some work has been improved. This is now a high proficient body of work, well
done.
Mark out of 20: 13/20 15/20
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 18/12/16 07/02/17
Student action plan for improvement
I have improved all the points you have told me to improve (4,10,11,12 and 14).
Final mark out of 20: 15 Date: 07/02/17