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1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: Yasmin Rice
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Yes
2. Genre Analysis No
3. Target Audience Yes
4. Script Yes
5. Drafts Yes
6. Storyboard Yes
7. Shotlist Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan Yes
9. Locations Yes
10.Costumes Yes
11.Props Yes
12.Actors Yes
13.Equipment Yes
14.Production schedule Yes
Teachers comments
1. Your analysis of The Lovely Bones, Inception. Ferriss Bueller and The
Fugitive are very detailed, well done.
2. Great addition of genre conventions mind map, unfortunately both links to
your prezi are not working, we’ll have a look and see what the issue is
after Christmas. Prezi now working and embedded, great piece of
research displayed well.
3. Great research and visualisation of your target audience.
4. A well written script that follows conventions well.
5. Great inclusion of draft shot list, good evidence of drafting of ideas to
script.
6. Excellently planned storyboards, well done.
7. Excellently detailed shot list, well done.
8. Good floor plan of your main scenes, well done.
9. Locations planned and photographed clearly, well done.
10.Costume choices identified well. Good comments on colour meanings.
11.Prop choices identified well, good use of images.
12.Actor choices well thought through, great use of images.
13.Equipment choices identified well. Editing equipment added here.
14.A very detailed production schedule. You could add what equipment
(software) you will need to edit your film. Nothing further added.
Overall this is an excellent body of pre-production work Yasmin, well done. This
is just into level 4 at the moment. If you make the above additions this will be a
strong level 4.
You have used your time well to improve work, well done, level 4.

2. Mark out of 20: 16
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 22/12/14
Student action plan for improvement
Final mark out of 20:17 Date:16/03/15