AS Coursework feedback pre production

1. AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback
Student Name: LAMBERT Charlotte
Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on
blog
1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Yes
2. Genre Analysis Yes
3. Target Audience Yes
4. Script Yes
5. Drafts Yes
6. Storyboard Yes
7. Shotlist Yes
8. Layouts – floor plan Some
9. Locations Some
10.Costumes Yes
11.Props Yes
12.Actors Yes
13.Equipment Yes
14.Production schedule Yes
Teachers comments
1. 3 excellent analyses of film openings Raiders of the Lost Ark, Skyfall and
Hot Fuzz. Fantastic use of technical language throughout. You could add
how these openings are going to help you with your product.
2. Good general research of the genre presented well using powerpoint.
You could add more on the history of the genre showing how it has
evolved today.
3. Good research on target audience. Good use of avatar creator to show
stereotypical audience members. You could add where on the NRS scale
you would place your audience.
4. Excellent script, builds up the mystery well. However, it needs some
formatting tweaks, remember to state where you are at the start of each
scene. Script has now been updated due to cutting a character. This
could be formatted better.
5. Clear evidence of drafting of ideas throughout.
6. A great set of storyboards, you need to upload them another way as they
are quite hard to read at the moment.
7. A fantastic shot list, well done. Clear, precise and shows your vision.
8. Completed but cannot see, please re scan.
9. Location choices explained well however you need to add images
10.Costume choices explained well, you need to add images
11.Prop choices explained basically, you could add reasons for choices and
images
12.Actor choices not explained or shown, please add this. Actor choices
now added. Good explanation with images added.
13.Equipment is detailed briefly in the production schedule. You could do
this as a separate post with more detail. Equipment now added, good
use of images.

2. 14.A good production schedule detailing all stages of production well.
However you could break down the actual production stage into more
detail. What scenes will you shoot on which days. Will 2 days be
enough?
Overall this is a proficient body of work, Charlotte. Good use of technology
throughout. Your blog is well organised with good use of labels. You are missing
actor choices and equipment list, please add these. Also look at feedback
above for improvements.
Preliminary tasks all completed and blogged – well done
Some work has been improved. However some has not which is a shame. Work
is of level 3 proficient standard.
Mark out of 20: 12/20 13/20
Teacher name: A Jones Date: 18/12/16 07/02/17
Student action plan for improvement
Final mark out of 20: 13 Date: 07/02/17