Celina Smith created a podcast evaluating the movie Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. She included an introduction, description of the movie, and her thoughts. Planning helped determine her content. Time management could be improved. The podcast had background music and clips from the movie. Peer feedback noted occasional thuds and suggested adding more sound effects or making it cheerier. Celina agrees the thuds could be removed and would include more information in the future.
6. Technical Qualities
• same
• The layout
• Background music
• Different clips from movie
• Visual elements
• Clips
• https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9--
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7. Aural Qualities
• You can clearly hear my voice even with the
background song
• I like the background track
• I would improve my script to include more
content.
8. Audience Appeal
I have appealed to my target audience by including things form the movie and
making sure its still age appropriate. The soundtrack appeals to the audience
because it links the old Harry Potter movies with fantastic beasts and where to
find them making it appeal to more fan’s of the series.
10. Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– It’s a good review because it doesn’t spoil any of
the film, so even if you haven’t watched it, you
can still listen to the review
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– The sound travels from ear to ear, it doesn’t stay
still, there are also occasional thuds throughout
11. Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– I lionike the amount of informat
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– More sound effects and a little more cheery
12. Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
• The delivery style was clear and easy to follow
• The tone of voice used was optimistic and
professional
• The content was interesting
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
• Some points in the script repeat
• The music is quite quiet and could have been
edited to add more effect.
13. Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback?
– I do agree with “there are also occasional thuds
throughout” this is because I couldn't’t sit down
and I was walking around
– What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback?
– I dissagree with the second feed back I think my
product could have included more information
14. Peer Feedback Summary
– I would include more information in my podcast
and I would sit down somewhere quiet.
Editor's Notes
What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product?
What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product?
What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time?
What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences
Does your work sound good? Was it creative? What aspects of your product’s audio do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it?
Discuss the strengths and weaknesses
How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience.
Make reference to specific recordings, dialogue, music and sound effects
What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?