3. Research
• The strengths of me research where that I used a lot
of the ideas I got from it in my final product
• I got an idea of what kind of things I would like to say
in my final product
• I think a weakness of my research is that all the
existing products where similar to each other so
didn’t give me a lot of ideas to use
• To improve my research I could’ve looked for more
different examples
4. Planning
• The planning and experiment for the product helped a
lot
• The planning help with deciding what would be put in
my final product and helped picking the final sound
effects
• Doing an experiment helped me with using premier so
I knew what I was doing when making my final product
• A weakness of my planning was that I took a lot of time
and I couldn’t find a lot of sound effects
5. Time Management
• I didn’t manage my time well each step took too long for me
to complete
• I think if I had more time my final product would have more
sound effects in as I would’ve planned more to use
• If I had more time my final product would’ve been improved
more
6. Technical Qualities
• The existing product has more sound effects in
than mine and the existing product is longer
• They both have similar information in them
for the listener and also they are both to
encourage people to get involved
7. Aural Qualities
• The voice I recorded speaks clearly and the
pace is not too fast or slow.
• The amount of information in the recording is
enough for someone to use to sign up for the
event.
• The voice is friendly and encouraging
• Add more sound effects and more children in
the background having fun that gave the
recording a warm friendly vibe
8. Audience Appeal
I have used a woman of a similar age to the target
audience
I have included background noise of children having fun
so people may empathise and relate if they have
children
10. Feedback 1
• What did you like about the product?
– Its informative without being boring and the fade
to the audio clip from the person speaking is well
done
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– More clips through would maybe make it appeal
to more people.
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11. Feedback 2
• What did you like about the product?
– I like the voice because I think a Yorkshire voice is
pleasant to listen to
– I also think it was very informative
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
• More sound effects or background music of
people having a good time
12. Feedback 3
• What did you like about the product?
– I liked the way in which the delivery was paced
clearly so you could follow it
– I liked the sound effect near the end which gave
the final delivery of the audio some excitement
• What improvements could have been made to
the product?
– Maybe some background soundtrack to give some
atmosphere to the podcast.
13. Peer Feedback Summary
• What do you agree with from your peer
feedback? I agree that adding more
background music or sound effects would
make it better
• I also agree that the speaking was clear and
easy to follow
• What do you disagree with from your peer
feedback? i agree with all comments made
from the peer feedback
14. Peer Feedback Summary
– People thought the voice was clear and easy to
follow and also they thought that the ending
sound effect added in well
– They also all said adding more background music
or more sound effects would have made it better
Editor's Notes
What were the strengths of your research? How did your research help your product?
What were the weaknesses of your research? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
What were the strengths of your planning? How did your planning help your product?
What were the weaknesses of your planning? What could you have done better/improve? What effect would this have had on your product?
Did you manage your time well? Did you complete your project on time or would your products have improved with additional time?
What would you have done if you had more time to produce your work?
Compare your work to similar existing products and discuss the similarities and differences
Does your work sound good? Was it creative? What aspects of your product’s audio do you like? What would you improve? How would you improve it?
Discuss the strengths and weaknesses
How have you appealed to your target audience? What specific bits of content would appeal to your target audience.
Make reference to specific recordings, dialogue, music and sound effects
What changes would you make to your product based upon your peer feedback and why?