The document discusses feedback received on draft work from an audience. The feedback helped the author understand the strengths and weaknesses of their work and how to make it more conventional and appealing. Feedback suggested changing a collage-like panel to be more conventional and using an image of the main artists on the cover to help identification. Additional feedback addressed the need for conventional length shots to keep the audience engaged. Overall, the key points from feedback centered around consistency of images, fonts, shot types, props, mise-en-scene, editing, and color schemes to create cohesion across products.