This document contains peer feedback on graphics created for a computer game. The feedback includes comments on what is liked about the graphics as well as suggestions for further development. Feedback noted that the graphics have a consistent simple style and include realistic elements like a health bar. Suggestions included making the character's ears and nose more realistic, extending the character's face when viewed from the side, and including animated gameplay elements. The creator agrees some elements could be improved, like character realism and menu features, and plans changes to address this feedback in future assets.

1. Peer/Audience
Feedback
Dan Bell

2. Assets

3. Assets

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9. Feedback 1
• What do you like about the graphics? I like the bus
because it is very detailed. I like the screenshot of the
game because it has assets that you would see in a real
game for example the health bar and it tells you what
level you are on.
• What would you do to develop the graphics? On slide 7
I would develop the graphics by changing the ears to a
realistic size and also adjust the nose to look more
realistic. I might add a title screen if you have not
already done so.

10. Feedback 2
• What do you like about the graphics?
– I enjoyed the consistencies with the more simple
type of graphics and that it didn’t change in detail
through ought. I also enjoyed the HUD and how
things looked like the health bar.
• What would you do to develop the graphics?
– When Mr Franks face is to the side it may be a
good idea to extend it out more than you have as
it looks a bit squashed at the moment

11. Feedback 3
• What do you like about the graphics?
– I like that you have a continuous style through all of your graphics so
that they all work together.
– You have included a range of things that will be in the game so it is
easy to understand the type of game you are creating.
– The chainsaw animation works well and looks like the movement of a
chainsaw.
– All of the colours work well together and have a nice contrast with the
bright tones.
• What would you do to develop the graphics?
– Maybe try to include a screen which include animation as if you were
in gameplay, for example include the man with the chainsaw in the
screenshot.
– You could include a difficulty setting menu or something similar.

12. Self Assessment

13. Feedback Evaluation
• What feedback did you receive that you agree with?
Why?
– the feedback I agree with most is definitely that all of the
colours blend in well together.
– I also agree that Mr. Franks could have more realistic sized
ears.
– I am glad that people liked the chainsaw animation as I
also believe that it works well.
– I think I could’ve added more to the main menu screen.
• What feedback did you receive that you disagree with?
Why?
– Personally I feel that my health bar could be of slightly
better quality.

14. Self Assessment
Current working grade Desired grade
P M
What do you have to do to achieve your desired grade?
• Add more movement to my characters. Make my game more realistic.
What changes (if any) do you plan to make in your past/future
assets?
• I need to add more realistic looking characters and add more features to
main menus and backgrounds.
P3 create digital graphics for a
computer game following industry
practice, working within
appropriate conventions and with
some assistance.
M3 create digital graphics for a
computer game to a good technical
standard following industry
practice, showing some
imagination and with
only occasional assistance.
D3 create digital graphics for a
computer game to a technical quality
that reflects near-professional
standards following industry practice,
showing creativity and flair and
working independently to
professional expectations.