This document summarizes Jake Jarvis's evaluation of an FMP project. It describes the strengths and weaknesses of the project's research, planning, time management, technical qualities, aesthetic qualities, and audience appeal based on peer feedback. The peer feedback suggested adding more content, levels, and rewards to engage players longer, and improving graphics and character designs to make the game world more immersive. Based on the feedback, Jake would improve the project by adding more content and improving graphics and character designs.