1. A2 Coursework Overall Marks Sheet
Name: Lydia Barba
Planning – comments and mark out of 16/20
Some very good work with good research into theories, genre and artists. More
detail in audience would be good. A confident piece of work.
Construction – Main Task – comments and mark out of 35/40
The candidate has shown excellence in the in the creative use of most of the
technical skills. Editing matching the beat of the song well and is clear. Controlled
use of the camera (variety of shot sizes) Mise en scene and performance follow
genre conventions excellently. Nice addition of a production clip.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Digipak) comments and mark out of 7/10
Digipak has been constructed as an album proficiently. Good use of conventions in
terms of artist/star, logos, copyright etc. Inside sleeve could have stronger image,
plus addition of artist thanks? Good addition of step-by-step showing how some
stages of the digipak was created.
Construction – Ancillary Task 1 (Poster) comments and mark out of 7/10
Poster shows understanding of conventions, with digipak the main focus, plus
company logos. Poster has good design using most of the technical skills, with 3
previous drafts included.
Evaluation – Comments and mark out of 16/20
Question 1 – answered with very good detail on decisions and construction using
Prezi. All decisions have been explained using examples of own work with clear links
to audience and Goodwin. Links to real world examples would have been good.
Question 2 – good detail in answerusing a SoundCloud slip - some links to current
bands and a clear idea as to the decisions made with clear understanding of genre,
conventions and audience.
Question 3 – answered excellently using YouTube video.Good reflection on
audience feedback with thought into how production could be improved.
Question 4 – good detail in answer using PowToon. Answer split well into planning,
construction and evaluation stages. Some slides go a bit quickly.
Overall an excellent evaluation piece. All questions answered well with great
understanding of the questions, with very good use of different technologies.
Total 81/100 Level: 4 Grade: A